Why I Wonder by hipps13
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Description
Cute To Me
At night I wonder though
When we go to bed
Why do you?
Slam your body
Up against me
My tummy that is
To lay down
To go to sleep
I won
Comments (12)
Bossie_Boots
Wow excellent !!!
B_PEACOCK
VEry heartfelt love. Loss of words this time love. Probably from how I am feeling today. Love ya
Denys234
Well done!
Richardphotos
always a pleasure to delve into your thoughts
auntietk
Beautifully written. You are so good at painting a picture of a feeling with nothing but your words, your heart, and your intention! Lovely work as always, my friend.
lizzibell
Very nice...
Thelby
Loneliness makes one clingy. It is not their fault. It is a reaction to being alone. 'Come Close and Don't Let Go' ......"EVER" But security can found in oneself, in ones own Heart, ............. if you only look Deep enough!!!!! Good art always inspires and never leaves the viewer empty, Fill me up so that I can fill others and when I get low, fill me up again. Beautiful Work, that's why I come back, ..... again and again and again and agai.............................................................................
ARTWITHIN
Your poem reminds me of my little dachshund, Daisy. She used to lay up against my back. And if I took too much room, her little legs would kick me rapidly so I would move over. How funny dogs are. I loved her and miss her. Thank you for reminding me of that with your beautiful poem, Linda. I understand it in my own way. Hugs, Suzanne ;)
NekhbetSun
Love the whole work, but the last 3 lines esp grab me....excellent Linda S
1010
A very moving writing, beautiful!
rainbows
Such feeling and love in your words, always. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.. Hugs. Linda. Diane.
vaggabondd
Very nice my friend.