Come, walk with me...revised by Amethst25
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I took all the comments from the first post and tried to improve the image. Thank you for your comments and support.
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Needing a breath of fresh air she slipped out the door and headed to the woods. In hopes he would be waiting, and they could finish the converstation from the night before. To her dismay he was no where to be found. She moved breathing in the fresh scent of the spring day. As she moved she heard a twig break, turning a smile play across her delicate features, her hand extended to him, "Come, walk with me..."
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V4
ilona - LadyHawk for V4
Woodland Playset 2
ryverthorn's Marie Antoinette Gown
3DWizard Curly Hair
LDP- Lights
Comments (31)
delbeke
Oh the grass makes it so much better and realistic, excellent
angelbearzs
wow she is very beatiful!!!!:)
jaynep12002
DLG - Oh wow!! This is awesome! The grasses and flowers add texture and the lighting is great! I saw the Woodland Playset at DAZ this afternoon and I'm really tempted... LOL! You've done a great job with this :)
Pankaj
The grass makes a big differed now. And the shadow are ..... not there! Great blend with the background pic. It doesnt look so flat any more(more alive)!!!
krouser
this is a very beautiful image! great work with this one. A+ 5
unrulywitch
DLG- Great results and I personally know how much time is involved placing all those plants and grasses. The shadows are much better also. My only tip would be postwork using the smudge tool on the hard edges of some of the grasses. I have the same sets and some can be placed a bit below ground to get realism and some just get that edge and there's no alternative but postwork. But if you are happy and done with it, be happy and done,it's wondrous.
flaviok
Belissima obra, aplausos
shotgung0d
DLG- - -> Well Kim I think you improved this one quite a bit. The grass is and flowers are a great addition and really helped the scene. By the way, you should be highly praised for your efforts. You are a great example of how to properly handle constructive comments, learn and come back with better. Keep it up!
Skyback
Interesting work!
swjkie100
This is like a 1000% better improvement over an already gorgeous work! 5+*****
Gojira95
DLG-- Bravo! She has a very sultry look & the gown looks perfect. I checked out the first version, and agree that you've improved it. As was pointed out earlier, use either a blur,in PS, or use the grass props in woodland just arund the trees so they don;t look like cut-outs. Very well done though. Cheers!
thotto
DLG, much better with the new plants on the ground, remains the face ...
mhossack
DLG This one looks great. The plants really add to it.
robin123
DLG outfit, pose, back drop and light all superb very good work and The time spent was worth it
MKeyes
DLG... OMG - Now this is what I'm talking about!!! WOW! You go girl! This is what its all about! I love it! I positively love! You walked away, thought about what was pointed out, and you came back with a star! BRILLIANT!!! WOW!
RundwulfWolfShield
~ DLG ~ Very well done! Sorry I missed the first. ~ a.k.a. draconis ~
Storm9167
Dlg -> Very nice scene.. Not certain what you're first version looked like but this is well done..
sjallen03
DLG - much improved over the orginal image I have to agree with unrulywitch's comments about the grass. I do like the grass adds more to the image.
evoluzione33
DLG Wow... very nicely done. Much improved!
MKruczek
DLG...Don't get discouraged. I know you were having a hard time with the lighting and shadows, but the work paid off and the render shows it. Congratulations and keep up the good work.
GARNETROSE
DLG;0]) wonderful placeing of the plants/grass. looks very natural. Beautiful work. Lighting and shadows are hard to get right, the way want it. But this is a great job
Niha
DLG AWESOME REWORK!!!!!!!!! YOu did a terrific job! I love the scenery! GORGEOUS WORK!
gandalf_1
DLG... And I thought the first version was good.... This one is FANTASTIC!!! Excellent lighting, and the grass really looks great!! A new favorite on my list.
KyotoDragon
DLG The plants and grass really do improve the image don't they. Moving the shadow lights also helped. Awesome rework.
ThomasMacCallum
DLG> Classy image, very well done
callad
DLG :) This is what a Dazneylander is all about; post, receive tips and positive critism and WORK with them!!!!! Way to go Kim!!!! Hats off :) You have certainly improved your first render A LOT !!! Lost the harsh trunk-shadows and altough I am watching this on a crummy hospital monitor it looks GREAT to me!!!!! Charley
GOLDILOCKSUK
Breathtaking! Superbly created with perfect matching colours. Everything looks amazing I like it and a gorgeous gown :) Cathy xoxoxo
shanpoo
DLG, Your doing such a good job and love that you soak in the advice. Even though I have done this for awhile now I learn new stuff everyday and thats how your art improves. Beautiful scene!!...Shannon ;]
DreamRage
DLG--> You managed to make this a wonderful image by taking what was pointed out to your last...a huge improvement ! very nice now !!!
amirapsp
DLG ---> Gorgeous piece gf...Hugs