Into the forest of fallen Hero's by mcyak72
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Description
Hey all,
I just want to say thank you all for your comment's & constructive criticism.
This image is a first in a series of work's I have in my head...
She walked into the forest to find her brother who had left on a Quest to find an artifact left by the Goddess Aphrodite, But unknowingly Aries Dark legion has enveloped the forest In search of the same Artifact. The worrioress is just starting to see the Nightmare that is upon Her....
Her fear is only shadowed by her resolve...Her brother will be back by her side soon. She swear's The dark legion's will be vanquished By Force, faith and strength of heart.
If only she Knew what trial's lay before her......Her convidense would not be....
I should say that working from my dream's is very hard since I can't remmember half of them so I have the hardest time bringing it all together....
Thank's for reading. I am the worst writer and speller so please bare with me. I am so used to seeing and thinking of the outline that I fail to remmember that all that view it can't see In thier head what I do....
Mcyak72
Matthew Yakalis
Comments (19)
RundwulfWolfShield
~ DLG ~ Interesting composition. Like the lighting effect. Best viewed at full size to see all the detail. Good work.
MKeyes
DLG... Hmmm, scratching head Sweety, tell me about this piece of art? I don't know how to judge it because I'm not certain what your intent was. I understand your title, but the tie between the image and it is missing. I will say this, its dark, somber, with an expression of displeasure. Her mourning? Yes, I can see the mournfullness here. But I would like you to tell us about it, or, give your image more to speak to us with. Very interesting pov.
callad
DLG :) The scene has a dark and a tad sinister 'feel' about it.. Agree with MKeyes I do not know if this is what you intended. I DO like the scene though, but would have placed the front leaf more to the right or left myself. It distracts the attention from the beautiful character/outfit.
Amethst25
DLG~ Very interesting image. I like the lighting the best, and yes I agree you need to see the full size image. The lighting near her hand seems to sparkle. I agree with Callad that the big leaf does distract I found myself looking at first. Maybe sizing it down a bit, i like the concept of it being there though. I do like the image.
Storm9167
Dlg->The lighting is interesting.. Perhap's a bit too dark, as it kind of masks some of the lesser details like the weapon in her left hand for instance!! Not certain whether she has one in her right hand or not!! Overall I would have to agree with all the above comments..
sjallen03
DLG - I have to mostly agree with MKeys on this one. I do like the back light coming through the window, but the rest of it is too dark.
jaynep12002
DLG - Interesting piece. At full size there is some lovely detail but I'm having trouble seeing it. I thought it was just my monitor but it seems I'm not the only one. Would like to hear more about the story behind the image.
Dragonluna1
Cool!!
shotgung0d
DLG- - -> For what it's worth you should edit in the story here that you posted on Dazney Land. I like this image, lots of detail to be seen but the darkness of it works against it. Perhaps if it were a tad bit brighter...
Niha
DLG The lighting is good.. but I really think the image would look better if you would just have left out the leaves completely.. I understand the forest theme but the leaves are just in the way...
shanpoo
DLG, I gave you some advice at our website!! Love the attitude you have on constuctive criticism thats how we grow as artists!...Shannon ;}
evoluzione33
DLG Very nice!
ThomasMacCallum
DLG Atmospheric and highly origional
Pankaj
May less leaves and more her? I know there you have this dream and in the morning you wake up and scratch your head and think: What the hell was that all about? Trying to reconstruct it is a totally differed cup of tea. Honnestly I don't really get it, but hey it wasn't my dream, right!!!
amirapsp
DLG ---> Awesome work here...Hugs
mhossack
DLG Nice work.
thotto
DLG, I am not sure - is it her or him in the picture ? The leaf in the foreground could be a symbol of him being withheld by Aries ? I am curious how the series unfolds.
robin123
Dude cards on the table the darkness thing way cool dark deep shadows I love. Allot of artist dont and always say it too dark me I see it for what it is meant to be a dark and ominous place and you got it well set up to be just that top marks, the leaf is a bit to big and kinda gets in the way, if it had been only a silhouette you would have got away with it but as is a bit too big n bright, the pose love it, expression way cool you got that one nailed not too clear what the two white lines are running across it but if that was an intention to have them then I will not knock em All in all I like it well done good story too
capitanpescanova
Interesting work and more interesting lights. Excellent!!!