Will It Be I Wonder by hipps13

Writers • (none) • posted on Jun 04, 2007

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After The Changes Countryside sure has changed Now and then I sure to get lost Amongst the dust So much... Grains of sand Drain through the palms ...Of my hands Love bubbles Every day I squeeze the dawn Tiny little bubbles Greet my eyes Soon after... Once you pull away The rhythm stops Grazing lands develop Nothing out of reach Will it be all right?

Comments (11)

7:37AM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Super!!

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9:29AM | Mon, 04 June 2007

they say everything works out in the end, but the middle can scare the heck out of a person. very creative writing

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10:04AM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Very nice

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12:18PM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Very beautiful poetry!

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1:27PM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Superb writing Linda and i luv the picture too my favourite colour blue hugs lou x

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1:29PM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Awesome!!

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3:31PM | Mon, 04 June 2007

AWESOME IMAGE AND POEM!

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9:08PM | Mon, 04 June 2007

Be all right? I don't know. Be different? Certainly. We adjust. Probably Be all right.

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7:18AM | Tue, 05 June 2007

I ahve to agree with Richard. Awesome writing love

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1:14AM | Thu, 07 June 2007

Great job...

8:59AM | Sun, 10 June 2007

So excellent! Love the line "squeeze the dawn". Hugs, Linda. Suzanne

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