Some things will never change by muddled
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Description
Slight reworking of previous entry, fixed guitar size and the model looks 'better'
Opinions?
btw apologies if this is supposed to be tagged on to previous work, not sure what the process is!
Comments (2)
kuerbote
Hi there. You asked for opinions, so here are mine: - The guitar is still a little too big. - You might try another lighting, because this one make the guitar look like it's fretless. A cool effect, but i don't think thta's what you're after in here. - The character's right hand is posed in a way that reminds me of a bass player instead of a guitar player. - The position of the guitar doesn't look right also. I'm telling you just to help you improve your image, please don't taje it the wrong way. Have a good day, Rodrigo
muddled
Hi, and thanks for the critique, it definitely isn't taken the wrong way :) Guitar still too big: i think you're right Lighting: I can see your point, If anything I will be inclined to take some lighting off the guitar completely, there is too much on it (to my mind) tbh I do't really mind if it looks fretless due to lighting, I think that kind of illusion can occur naturally anyway with photography, Position of hand/guitar: It's kinda how I play my guitar, with a very rhythmic styling, often muting with the palm of my hand on the strings, and coming away with some emphasis when i want a resounding ring, will often do that during lead breaks as well as rhythm parts, and kinda 'pulling' the guitar away from me with my left hand at those times. I think that will perhaps become clearer when i paint a strap in, as the strao will be a bit loose showing the dynamism of the pose a little clearer. erm i hope. Thanks for taking the time post your thoughts, it is appreciated, this IS an image i would like to get 'right', and will reflect further on your comments. Likewaise, have a nice day :)