The Diary by Amethst25
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[Edited the hand holding book, thanks for pointing that out I appreciate it]
I heard this song on the radio the other day, and this is the result.
Diary~ by Bread
I found her diary underneath a tree.
and started reading about me
The words she's written took me by surprise
you'd never read them in her eyes.
They said that she had found the love she waited for.
Wouldn't you know it, she wouldn't show it.
When she confronted with the writing there,
simply pretended not to care.
I passed it off as just in keeping with
her total disconcerting air
and though she tried to hide
the love that she denied,
wouldn't you know it, she wouldn't show it.
And as I go through my life, I will give to her my wife
all the sweet things that I can find.
I found her diary underneath a tree.
and started reading about me.
The words began stick and tears to flow.
Her meaning now was clear to see.
The love she'd waited for was someone else not me
Wouldn't you know it, she wouldn't show it.
and as I go through my life, I will wish for her his wife
all the sweet things that she can find
all the sweet things they can find
Comments (18)
richard57
excellent work my friend+5 for you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! richard
RundwulfWolfShield
~ DLG ~ Exellent piece! Good work!
MarciaGomes
Fanttico trabalho.+++++5
swjkie100
Oh man, his expression almost set me off! Very emotional, f-ing awesome job!
shanpoo
DLG, Way to go this is 5+++ image. I love his body language and such beautiful surroundings around him....Shannon ;}
MKeyes
DLG... Very strong image! Stunning surroundings with an incredible full scene. Lighting and shadow sweet ... lol ... only one thing. The diary itself. It looks placed between his thumb and index finger and that's all. Even looks like its cutting in to his guider there behind the index knuckle. Just a tip, when doing a "Hand Pose" render such as this, sit as he is sitting, and take a book in your hand and hold it, look at your fingers and where they are, in most cases, the middle finger, ring finger, pinky finger will curl inward to support holding the book in hand. I know it may seem like a small detail, but its one that if followed ... will make this image, Pure Perfection. Because otherwise, Beautiful and Heartrending ... you'll have hit the target dead on! Great work!
Niha
DLG The expression on his face is perfect! The surrounding is beautiful! Nice work!
ThomasMacCallum
DLG expertly posed, quite moving and you have done a beautiful job with the gardening.
callad
Wow Kim.. Watched the image first and found him looking so sad... Then I read your words.. and knew why.. EXCELLENT image with dramatic mood induced by his pose and the lighting.. (Also I did what MKeyes suggested.. took a book , sat down.. tried to put me in his place.. and then watched my hand holding the book.. ...she is right.. I hold it differently :) She is also right on the "near to perfection" part also!
evoluzione33
Wow... wow... yes... I love the garden and fence-line here... great posing too.
GARNETROSE
DLG;0]) perfect. love the very natural surroundings.
sjallen03
DLG - great image I think every one covered it all great job +5
thotto
DLG technically very good and even close to perfection, but I really don't like the face of the guy. Well, that's just me. I feel the hand rather well posed, but the forearm is cutting in the thigh.
Pankaj
He does't look very happy finding the diary. But he I love the Image placed in that beautful garden
amirapsp
DLG ---> Great emotion here...Hugs
FUNJOKER
Excellent creation ..... cheer they is marvellous;)*****.
mhossack
DLG Very nice render.
dragonmuse
Wonderful, touching scene.