Jesting Smile by Atreju
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Description
I'm not totally sure I'm done with this one. Any thoughts on how I can improve it are welcome! (And for reference, it is supposed to be a guy. . .)
I suppose I can blame the inspiration of this piece on the new Spanish words I learned to do with the beach.
edit- :) made some changes with the light source but decided to keep the eyebrows because much of the expression is lost without them.
Comments (3)
Ace10
Its good and there are a couple of things that could improve this.The eye brows are infront of the hair,left corner of the eye is the same.But what is strange for me is the light direction seems hard to know which direction its coming.Hope you dont think I'm being to hard on you. Alec
Atreju
Nonsense :) I'm quite aware by now that it's always the most difficult to pick out one's own faults. Criticism is helpful in its own way and I respect it when it's meant for good. I'll look into those things. Could you clarify what you mean about the eyes though? Thanks, by the way, for leaving your thoughts!
Atreju
scratch that, I think I understand what you mean now heh