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Fairy dust

Writers Faeries posted on Jul 04, 2007
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Fairy Dust By BobbiJo McBroom I fell right off the moon last night, I fell right off the moon! I was dreaming there without a care, when I fell right off the moon! I landed on a fairy's back, somehow I was so small I rode with her for a little while, she didn't mind at all! As we sailed across the sky, I watched in wonder great! While we drifted through the skies, the stars she did create! She sprinkled fairy dust, and as it fell, stars turned on one by one! She let me try my hand at it, I've never had such fun! When after a time she whispered,"'tis time to go back home!" I slipped into my bed on Earth, no one knew I'd gone! I told my Mom the adventure, she wants to come with me! The next time I dream of moonbeams, and being small like a fairy! We watched the skies so long that night, I fell fast asleep! She snuck off to her own bed and didn't make a peep! Tonight we'll watch the skies again, for fairies with their dust! I hope they'll take us with them, I hope, I hope, they must! We'll sail about the heavens, creating stars as we go! Sprinkling the fairy dust, dancing as we go! We'll be back home 'fore morning, with no one more the wise! Unless it's just my Nana, who'll see the fairy dust in our eyes!

Comments (27)


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Dinhi

6:42PM | Wed, 04 July 2007

What a delightful bit of story and rhyme! I was riding a moonbeam with you. You truly brought wonderful images with your words and memories of childhood fancy. Excellent BJ! [=

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npauling

8:08PM | Wed, 04 July 2007

What a super scene you have conjured up with this poem. Very magical and beautiful. Just the sort of story I would tell my grandchildren and you have set it to verse.

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mamabobbijo

8:23PM | Wed, 04 July 2007

I tried to change my avatar to go with it but am having little luck. RR decided that I don't need spaces between stanzas so it looks quite different than my usual work.

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CarolSassy

8:45PM | Wed, 04 July 2007

Very cute poem! I love the idea of it! You're so very creative! Excellent work! (:

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justnew

7:54AM | Thu, 05 July 2007

Your poem clearly shows your creativity! You are quite talented!

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NekhbetSun

8:57AM | Thu, 05 July 2007

Take me with you next time please :o) love it S ~ Hugs ~

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romanceworks

9:24AM | Thu, 05 July 2007

Oh, I fell off the moon and went on that ride with you. It was wonderful. I could easily see your magical verse in a children's book. CC

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three_grrr

8:45PM | Thu, 05 July 2007

Oh what a wonderful wonderful poem! (RR can be pretty testy sometimes, I've noticed that myself!) I didn't even have to close my eyes to go on that journey with you!

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rainbows

7:33PM | Fri, 06 July 2007

BJ!! Such a magical read.. I am with you all. Beautiful, beautiful picture painted with your words. Love your poppy avatar :-) Hugs. Diane.

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Druidstorm

11:13AM | Sun, 08 July 2007

"A ride of wonders your words bring, my mind opened to your realm forever our secret path for only we can see!" Once again your bring forth your craft that sings beauty into my mind. Bravo!!!...:))

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Hendesse

11:17AM | Mon, 09 July 2007

A wonderful poem indeed, it inspired the fantasy. Beautiful and very creative words!

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Richardphotos

8:15PM | Mon, 09 July 2007

I thought I had fell off the moon once, but it was only the bed.excellent writing

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lior

12:30AM | Thu, 12 July 2007

So wonderful writting!

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shahlaa

1:23PM | Thu, 12 July 2007

Beautifully written, the words just flow...I love your work so much and I will miss it once I go on the road with Joe...but no worries, I'll check what you've done when I return...

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TallPockets

4:48PM | Thu, 26 July 2007

Methinks it is time for another wonderful written work of yours? WINK. My best to you and yours, T.P.

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TwoPynts

1:50PM | Fri, 27 July 2007

Touching and playful BJ, I could see this as a bedtime story for small children! ;']

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mamabobbijo

8:36PM | Fri, 27 July 2007

There are some edits by Kort as well, Thank You most kindly Sir. I couldn't figure out how to do only them in red like my English teacher would have done.LOL

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Gaiadriel

12:53PM | Mon, 30 July 2007

A precious, dear, imagery-filled little night-journey, BJ ...Love it :)

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Bothellite

11:44PM | Wed, 01 August 2007

To be able -- to be able to take the place of honest early eyes, unencumbered and see the moon for what it really is. That's a gift. Don't lose that, I hope.

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Erynn

8:57AM | Thu, 02 August 2007

Wonderful :)

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Sekadhar

8:39AM | Sun, 05 August 2007

Super writing!*****!

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amota99517

5:48PM | Sat, 18 August 2007

Love this piece. It paints such a beauitful image.

MrsLubner

1:09PM | Wed, 14 November 2007

I haven't been very good about visiting your gallery and Flannelman has shamed me. Had to look in and since I have always been told stories about the fairies and pixied and brownies and elves, I had to stop and linger a bit over your work. Excellent. :-)

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clydedough

2:45AM | Fri, 16 November 2007

Such a neat adventure-i love it!

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HannaK

4:20AM | Fri, 16 November 2007

Wonderful inspiring poem

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Livarts

9:35PM | Wed, 23 January 2008

I love it.The intensity--I fell off the moon. It is wonderful.To turn the stars on one by one---it is great.

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vaggabondd

6:11PM | Wed, 30 September 2009

This is beautiful. I love it. it makes me want to dream dreams :)


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