.: The Sicilian Sparrow :. Part VI by Rainbowgirl
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I hadn't been there since the day I'd left the police. It looked unchanged. Dirty, old, worn out. But then, it hadn't changed at all during the years of my service why should it change now.
The receptionist gave me a smile and a vistor badge. I went upstairs. My old office.
'Hello Bonnie.'
'Sam! Now that's a surprise.' She frowned .
'Yeah, it's been a while...'
'Four months and five days since you stepped out of here to be exact. And seven months, eighteen days since...'
'I know, Bonnie and I'm sorry. Besides that, how's the balance? Do I owe you or do you owe me?'
'You owe me, Ms. smartass. And a lot, as you very well know.'
'Would you do me a favor though, Julia?' I hesitated. 'A professional favor?'
Julia looked into my face for the first time. 'Maybe just to get you out of my sight as soon as possible...'
'You're the worst liar in the whole department,' I smiled vaguely. 'Ever were.'
'And you're the best. Best liar, best cheater, best... Anyway, what do you want?'
'I need information about two persons. Lola Vavoom and an ex husband called Tony Brunetti, supposed to live in Baltimore.'
'Ah. You do divorce cases now...'
'It's not a divorce case. It's about a painting.'
She waved. 'Don't tell me, hunny. I'll see what I can do. And don't call me. I'll call you.'
'Thank you, Bonnie. I'm much obliged.'
I got up to leave the room. When I had reached the door she spoke in a low tone.
'Do you think we could..?' she paused. 'Go to hell, Samantha Baton!'
I closed the door.
...tbc...
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For some reason this was very hard to do. Not the image - though I had a hard time to find the right room and furniture - but the text. Dialogues suck in a foreign language *LOL* I'm not sure if I found the right tone and would be really happy if I could write it in my language. Would be difficult enough...
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Comments (36)
ChristineG
this looks amazing. absolutly awesome details. Hugs C
Ondoval
I love the left character. Great serie youre making, with an excellent mood & atmosphere.
Bernado
Great POV. Fantastic composition. Great pose and expression on Samantha. The dialogue looks fine to me... Unfortunately, I couln't say the same if it was on german. 8-)
nortalf
Is this the beggining of the story, what's your native tongue, I'm thinking Italian because of the sicilian thing, I love the theme
meselfr
excellent...
Boni
I love this series. Only crit I would add isn't your rendering, but the model for the blouse that the seated woman is wearing. It looks a little plastic, not sure what you could do to fix it. The dialog fine, very 40's pulp detective story style. You did a nice job there. Keep it up~