Preflight take III by DeathWalker

Vue • Work In Progress • posted on Jul 19, 2007

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Well here it is again. . . taking your suggestions and I moved Vicky out into the light. You can see her face now, but I realize more than ever that I need to redo her hair. I think it's way to jaggy, so I'll probably increase the vertecie count to about 30-35. Any way thanx again for the comments and suggestions and please feel free to leave one if you wish.

Comments (11)

altec101

12:03PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

Excellent render!!

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loutout

12:08PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

Excellent image!!

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spm91g

12:09PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

Well done!

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stu1234

1:27PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

yeh i agree about the hair thing her hand looks bit weird aswell, apart from for that awesome looks much better with her in the light

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FALCON2

4:15PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

The hands do appear a bit forced in those positions, and placing her so close visually speaking to the brilliant red wall light made me think she was light-saber armed at first glance. :) Great image, and getting better with each iteration!

MigHound

5:35PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

Much better... You took the recon bot idea from HL2, didn't ya...

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eldritch48

7:36PM | Thu, 19 July 2007

I might rotate her slightly so she's looking more into the frame, and maybe move her so that her shadow comes out of the lower left corner. To balance the composition, try putting the flying droid in the upper right side of the frame.

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