Eyes Carry a Message by hipps13
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Description
Afar and Beyond
Eyes stare beyond
Place in the water
Afar in the way
Funny feeling inside
Grows warm to plant
Natural world insight
Horizon across the sky
Out in the distant feels
Eyes begin to burn
Trials of hardships
Errors of sorrows
After the fire
Life begins to see
Cannot be a life
Someone who constantly
Crumbles you to the ground
Degrades
Humiliates
Tears so much apart
Sub conscious mind
Listens very well
And never forgets
Touches a place
So far and deep
Need...
Needed...
The tears cried the eyes
Make them laugh silly
Please came the words
So much more can be told
When you hold tight
And carry on your way
*Image Bryce 5.5
*Ape 3D Starter Pack from Daz
©LKS 2007
Comments (12)
auntietk
Such a lovely sky, reflected in the water, and your friend looks nice there, too. The references in your poem are a nice tie-in. Great presentation!
Skyback
Excellent work!!! 5+!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
B_PEACOCK
Excellent work on your image and as always you paint your words like a true artist
Denys234
Excellent!!
spm91g
Very excellent!! Have a good day!! : )
Bossie_Boots
Fantastic Linda those words again touch the heart and love your picture hugs lou x
Richardphotos
very surreal terrain.maybe in another galaxy.excellent writing Linda
vaggabondd
very nice
lizzibell
Nice work...
Thelby
Beautiful as Always!!!
densa
excellent pose and words
NekhbetSun
Wonderful Linda...you're doing so well with the Bryce ! ~ Hugs ~