Please take these comments as an offering for help. First, what camera are you using? Second, there are a few things with the model/picture. You can go about this two different was - trying to get the model to give you what the market is now wanting today or adjusting the picture to make it look like what is needed. The model's lips are too sunken in. Many models can correct this by pushing out there lips and then relaxing enough to look natural. However, some of us were just not born with plump lips. (smile) This is where adjuting the picture is necessary. The other is hair. Flyaways give pictures looks, but they have to have some order. Hair needs to look silky. Many of the flyaways on the top of her head need to be removed, and from the left hand side. A soft focus needs to be added - either through the camera or in software. The model also doesn't look like she's relaxed. The dark roots also need to be lightened. I'm posting this here rather than sending it to you personally because I know there are others out there that will read this and learn from it as well. I hope this helps.

That is very good advice.... Thank You very much, I really appreciate it....

A wonderful portrait and a real intersting comment from kcorbett. Excellent really!!!