HI,TO ALL MY FRIENDS HERE IN RENDEROSITY..To day is a good day my sprits are high and so I want to shar..a story with you all..the story of andron.. THE ALIEN MURDERS (The Chronicles Of Andron) MY NAME IS detective Andron. I Live on a planet Called Sentron in Nubeus Galaxy. Our species is not like any other. Our abilities to read minds, control matter at will and time travel have made us a one of a kind race in the entire universe. Because of this we have decided that law and order is the only way. So our entire planet has become one force for good. The good of the galaxy and the universe. We have become the police. The keepers of peace and justice. Now that peace has been broken by some insane creature. That infects and kills all that stands in it's way. It started on our peaceful planet Sentron. It has killed and infected 10,000 of my people. All our forces have been deployed to try and stop this creature from killing any more of our people. But the creature has escaped and has left a trail of killing. I have followed him from planet! to planet! I have followed and seen his mass destruction on planet Crylon. This evil thing killed an entire alien race. He killed one after the other in cold blood. I still followed. On planet Crelcon he killed again and left a trail of death. I still followed it and now this evil heads toward the blue planet. The planet called Earth. It is here where I will stop the evil monster. It is here where I will stop the death. The time has come. The peace keeper is here and this time you will not escape me! Another day has passed. I enter the planet's atmosphere, this planet called Earth, their sun is bright like a nubien star. I have followed the creature here! My ship has travelled through time and space itself to get here. My fuel is exausted. I must find some sort of energy to restore my ships power cells. The atmosphere here is dense. I don't know how these earth creatures live here. Their ozone is almost gone! Their air and sky are polluted and their water has become undrinkable. I don't know how they manage to survive. My ship's sensor reading does not detect the creature's life force! I must have arrived here before the creature did. I look out of my ship's scanner screen and I can see the Earthlings cities. It is nothing compared to ours. Their technology is limited. They are wasteful and selfish beings. I don't know if this world is worth saving? but I am here and I am the Peace Keeper. I am the police and life is life and all creatures have the right to live just as I do! So I must save this planet called Earth. The humans must not detect me! I will keep my ship cloaked and I will make myself look like they do. I will hide my form from them. Unfortunately I must leave my ship so that I may find some sort of power to refuel my ship before the monster arrives. The destroyer, the killer of 10,000 of my people! and this is just the beging..all Copy Rights Rigoberto Gonzalez 2007. can some one tell me if this story is eny good..character and props made by me..background I got here in ren in the free stuff can't remember who made it but it's Awesome..thanks you friend Rigo..