Will this be an RMXP game? Anyways, the thing that stands out most for me is the character in the middle. I like her general appearence and how she is presented in this peice. It's not usually a good idea to use the default face though, no matter how nice it looks. I recommended Capsces' Kioki morphs at Daz, they're easy to use and bring great results. The guy to the left and the girl to the right look too 'hard' in contrast to the soft presentation of the center girl. For this I recommend either rendering the other two characters in the same way (possibly even standing in a similar pose, as a group render rather than a collage of singular renders) with the soft postwork, or just to have the lady on her own (I assume from her facial markings and striking beauty that she's proberbly a summoner, and a key character in the game). Also, try not to clash styles. Neither the guy nor the girl to the right have textures applied to them (especially in the case of the guy's hair). I suggest re-using the default Daz textures on the girl to the right to keep a consistant style, but either use a different make-up setting, or (if you don't want lipstick) edit the original texture in Photoshop to your liking. For the blue hair you could proberbly keep it as it is and get away with it, but to give it depth try giving it a bump map. I can't say much for the guy as I can't really see his face properly. ^^" The backgrounds and borders are nice, and seem to fit the theme quite well. ^_^ Anyway, that's all I can think of right now. ^.^