Queen of Egypt by whaggett
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Description
When I say critical comments are welcome, I really do mean that. I would like to improve my work, and I cannot do that without honest opinions.
A special thanks to the people in the Critique Forum for their helpful comments and suggestions.
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Comments (4)
Li-C.
Baeutiful scene, love the lighting. In my own rather humble opinion the face is a wee bit masculine, but aside from that the graphic is beautiful!
bakapo
I really like the scene, her outfit is great and so are the props. my only concern is her pose... is she holding that jar with her pinky? maybe bring down the right arm so she can hold the jar with that hand.
Cimaira
wonderful scene and composition! I will agree with the other two comments about softening/making more feminine the face and the jar appearing to be floating. Also maybe some adjustment on her shoes, the toes curl up a bit. But over all a fantastic render. I especially like the way her hands are posed, very natural.
amirapsp
DLG ---> Stunning work as always!