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Marching Orders

Poser Science Fiction posted on Aug 24, 2007
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Jin jabbed the elevator-pad again. hard enough to dent it, and exclaimed, "What the fuck is wrong with this thing?" General Chiboo shouted at her, "Stop right there, you blond hot-head!" The General summoned an elevator while shouting over her shoulder at Narchi and Dokka, "Narchi! Sync your comm to mine! Dokka take the east stair and co-ordinate with the troopers on the Hangar Level!" Jin jumped on the elevator and touched the activator, which said, "Elevators are OFF-LINE! THE CITY IS IN LOCK-DOWN MODE!" Narchi and Dokka shouted acknowledgments as they ran down the far stairs. Jin frowned in disgust and moved to follow Narchi, as General Boo said loudly, "JIN! Freeze!" Boo slapped the activator and snapped, "Over-ride! D-o-C-S General Boo! Hangar 17-A Emergency speed!" "Authority of General ChiBoo recognized. Department of City Survival approval noted." Came the emotionless voice of the City Central Computer. Chiboo glared at Jin and read off to her, "If you act independant of City Authority during LOCK-DOWN, you will be SHOT as a subversive by city authorities. Do you UNDERSTAND THIS? It's on record? You want to act to save Toxic--YOU ACT UNDER MY AUTHORITY! Get deputized you go where I say, you do what I say, you act when I say! UNDERSTAND?" Jin looked at the little red-skinned Deva woman and tried not to smile or pat her on the head. Jin Nodded and ended up smirking, "For a little girl--you sure got BIG BALLS! You do know I'm a human you'd be ordering around?" Boo looked her straight in the eye and snapped, "I don't give a rat's ass who you are, or think you are. The city is in danger. Your Toxic is involved. You in or out?" Jin snapped to and rapped out,"I'm IN,mamm! Order away!" The elevator chimed as it arrived at the hangar level. General Chiboo pointed and said, "Alright--go kick some alien ass. Keep co-ordinated with the local troops. I'll post your IFF ident code to the city comm-protocols, so you don't get shot by friendlies." "Thanks, GENERAL Chiboo." Jin's helmet face-plate flickered into exsistance before her face. Jin said while sliding out the elevator door opening,"I read two 'friendlies' identifying as Measure and Amma. They are armored up and in the nieghborhood!" General Boo sighed, "More firepower against unknown numbers is a good thing, I suppose. I'll contact them. You watch your back." Jin ran across the hangar floor toward the stairs going up the control room, as Boo sidled around to where F'Loona and Treel were. The amount of destruction and smoke was fearful. Boo looked at F'Loona and got a VERY dangerous idea. --TO BE CONTINUED!!-- media is WIngs3d,Poser7,Blacksmith2.2

Comments (7)


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Mondwin

10:26AM | Fri, 24 August 2007

Amazing and beauty image...bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx

cujoe_da_man

1:10PM | Fri, 24 August 2007

ooo ooo ooo, where'd you get that suit on the left, that is awesome, some of my figures are needing some new threads :P nice iamge

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JOELGLAINE

5:44PM | Fri, 24 August 2007

I'll play with it tonight, I think. It's a small area in an elevator, and the camera is really restricted in placement. Problem is--lot of talking in an elevator isn't going to be terribly dramatic, so I'm sort of stuck with limits I've got to push hard.

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Madbat

10:57PM | Fri, 24 August 2007

Very interesting character on the left!

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Bill_Wa

11:56PM | Fri, 24 August 2007

That is one fiestly lady, where do I sign up!

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Rutra

4:56AM | Sat, 25 August 2007

I was surprised when I saw so few elements in a scene of yours. :-) But those few ones are good ones. That outfit is incredible! EDIT: IMO, the POV is much, much better now! It also allows us to take a closer look at that fantastic outfit.

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kalon

7:30AM | Sat, 25 August 2007

Comment before revision There is a lot of action in the narrative, yet the scene you chose to illustrate is very tame, and if she's trying to intimidate, why isn't she looking at her? Nice outfits. Comment after revision The point of view is better, but IMO the positioning of their bodies now loses any sense of conflict. Without the text, the story this image would tell is: Jin entered and was instructed to move forward.


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