tangerine wip by SkoolDaze

Poser • (none) • posted on Aug 30, 2007

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Description

This was done as an outfit concept for a project a friend of mine is doing. I did several outfits and this was not one of the ones he picked. However, I kind of like it for some reason and may use it in a future image, so I thought I would share and see if I could get some feedback on where I need to go with it... The name was given by my god-daughter, I just changed whip to wip :) ~ thanks for viewing! ~ thanks so much for all the wonderful notes about the AOM nomination... I really appreciate the support!

Comments (64)

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3Dsmacker

11:59PM | Thu, 30 August 2007

Thoroughly delightful. A refreshingly original work. +5

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krouser

11:59PM | Thu, 30 August 2007

awesome outfit! i would make the top and pants the same color just a bit lighter to set them apart but other then that this is killer! A+ 5

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Belladzines

12:01AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

fantastic!! love the colors.

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Anruth

12:04AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Excellent.

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Krid

12:23AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

beautiful lady and excellent postwork

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ruana

12:31AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

wow!!!! your talent never stops amazing me!!! great work! and i love the outfit!

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RGUS

12:39AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

I love the graphic style here.. and AOM.. oh I remember that welll.. the pressure.. the pressure... and now buggering off to check it out!!!!

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Hawk23

1:03AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Nice, very nice !!

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Giana

1:08AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

hm, talk about a too open-ended question... it'd really depend how much revision you're up for, no? if you're wanting to stay with the colour scheme, the cloth on either sides of her face may look better in the white - right now she seems too orange heavy up top... i'd redesign some of the midsection/torso area as the bandeau seems a bit bland, and personally, i'd rather see some leg rather than those pants, though keep the 'kini bottom... [shrug] i also think adding a bit of texturing to give a hint of bumpy leather to the arms/shoulder area might add a nice touch...

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Erynn

2:09AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Incredible image!!! Excellent work :)

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prionbrain

2:11AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Genious!!! Awesome work!!! I love it!!!

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ilona

2:49AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Look John.. I would really love to give you any feedback on how you could improve it.. but I am biast... for me it´s perfect as is.. I look it and I love it .Tangerine isn´t my favorite color and yet you make me like it. Her skin reflects it well, so for me.. it´s just perfect.. and the design of the outfit.. well.. creative as always and a pleasure to see each and every time!!!!!

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corvas

3:05AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

wow amazing outfit,the way you painted it makes it look like it was actually on her and not painted on,brilliant work,truly amazing

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yorkshire_pud

3:19AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Well all i can say is this is amazing just as it is!! Superb art :O)

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Bossie_Boots

3:27AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

For me its perfect the colour is beautiful i cant believe you painted that its amazing superb work hugs lou x

LuLeLuna

3:53AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Awsome outfit..fantastic artwork =0)

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aik_696

4:47AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Very creative outfit, that is for sure. I like it, but like Giana said seeing a bit more of her legs would add some more to the outfit. Great work anyway!

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Antonio57

4:54AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Très bon travail!!!!!!!!

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xeniaghost

4:58AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Awesome character and the postwork is mindblowing! As for feedback on the outfit, i agree with Giana and personally would make the leggings attach to the bikini bottom with suspenders or something, same with the sleeves so a bit of the shoulders are showing. Besides that, excellent work and congrats on the AOM nomination!

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gigahedron

5:12AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Excellent image! Love your style...

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missgrin

5:26AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

Very beautiful, love the outfit.

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louly

5:36AM | Fri, 31 August 2007

I would make the same changes as Giana suggests, I think it's the white of the midsection and of the legs that is too contrasting in colour and in texture. And again, the same as her... too orange on top, too much the same. As I'm saying, I would make the changes she suggests. Still an amazing outfit, design wise and I like the graphic nature of the image. Hard to criticize someone that is so good :) Congrats on the AOM nomination! Well deserved.

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