Baby Steps Walk by hipps13
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Description
……To See
Little footprints
Pinkie toe shy
So little you are
Hide behind
The tears that pour
Made a mark
Little black dot
One day must be
Ought to see
Laughter spoke
Comes a sound
Nobody heard
Thought to see
Sit and wonder
Nobody sees
Really knows
What to think
Middles to cross
Roads that follow
Ridges see crumble
Come tumbling down
Stuck sometimes
Which way to go
Hold on sweetie pie
Goodbye seems so final
Little footprints
Pinkie toe shy
Do not be afraid
To walk away
……to see
*Image Bryce 5.5
©LKS 2007
Comments (16)
sessan53
Very great work on this picture. Beautiful words:-)hugs sessan
Bossie_Boots
Superb work linda as always your words are amazing as is your image hugs lou x
Richardphotos
exceptional beach.I think the best from Bryce I remember seeing Linda.imaginative writing skills you have
vaggabondd
Very nice work my friend
auntietk
Wow - yeah! Nice beach! I love the middle ground, where it looks like there's seaweed strewn all around, and the sand is wet. Lovely mood in your poem today, too. Wonderful work!
Ionel
You are a wonderful poet, Linda!!!
Denys234
Beautifully done!!
eryt
words and image are superb..bravo!
ARTWITHIN
The fit of image and poem is perfect. Your poem strikes me as something many experience at one time or other in their lives. It is part of the journey we make. We start out on a path, then come the detours, the forks in the road, the barriers, the tributaries. My it is a wonder we ever make it to our destination, but we will. Hugs and love, Linda. Big smiles! Suzanne
B_PEACOCK
Cool looking scene. Deep writing love.Very thought provoking
densa
excellent
rainbows
Such a beautiful image, sweet Linda. Words from your deep and loving heart. So special a work. Gentle Hugs. Diane. xx
MagikUnicorn
Not an easy job to play with water level WELL DONE
lizzibell
Nice work...
NekhbetSun
Fave !!! :o)
Burpee
Delightful and fun poem! I like your footprints in the sand too...great scene!