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Obscuria kissed. Revision.

Critique Science Fiction posted on Oct 21, 2007
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This is just a revision of my previous pic, and a bit of an experiment. I fixed the pokey on the ribbon, changed her hair to a much longer style. Posed in Poser 7, I did a moonlit render using Light Dome Pro, and an ambient render in DS. Then in Paint Shop Pro, I did a black backgound, pasted the moonlit image as the first layer and ran the lithograph filter on it. Pasted the ambient pic as layer two and ran the illustrator filter on it, then copied it again as layer three with the line drawing filter and set it as the overlay. I kinda like how it turned out. :) Credits are same as before, except it's the Anastasia hair instead of Tia Hair. :) Greywolf

Comments (11)


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FinalCross31

1:42PM | Sun, 21 October 2007

Very dramatic! I love her bat-like wings. I think this pic turned out really good!

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Kartika

1:58PM | Sun, 21 October 2007

Superb artwork!

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RodolfoCiminelli

2:03PM | Sun, 21 October 2007

Impressive work and very creative postwork....!!! Beautiful graphic aspect.....!!!!

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alltheoriginalnames

2:06PM | Sun, 21 October 2007

I really like this, intersting style. If I could make a suggestion, I would silde the camera just a hair to either side. The tree in the back ground is right above her head, I thought it was a weird hat at first. Confuses the image a bit for me. Other than that, great piece of work man.

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JCD

9:31PM | Sun, 21 October 2007

Excellent effect.

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originalkitten

7:02AM | Mon, 22 October 2007

Awesome!

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StarChildSong

9:26AM | Mon, 22 October 2007

I like this one even better. I love how the patterns create dynamic diagonals example the direction of wing bones in opposition to the stripes of the male's knit hat. Well done.

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ElBorja

3:07AM | Tue, 23 October 2007

It is dificult to find something to tell, it may be because it is already a rework and you fixed most of the things that needed to be. I would suggest a bit of camera tweaking myself, just as it was already mentionned. for a scene like this one, to make a more dramatic effect, I would suggest to having a camera pointing up from the floor, enchasing the characters in the sky. Of course, depending on your background I know this is a difficult task (trees with no tops for example). But again, it is more a little detail. The overall feeling of the picture is nice.

Apercu

5:01PM | Wed, 24 October 2007

Great picture.

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Georges_H_Hoens

9:17AM | Wed, 07 November 2007

This is a great result, I find it great. My only remark is that the two subjects are alittle bit too much on the center. Its cool to follow the golden ratio on this kind of subject. May I suggest a little tutorial I did about it : A concise of Golden Ratio tutorial
Hope it will help. Excellent job anyway!

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Yotna

7:21AM | Tue, 20 November 2007

Visually speaking I love this but the POV does force you to centre the models and that creates a less than perfect aspect to the scene. I am very impressed with you post work here. Beat many of the PS actions for tooning that I have used.


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