Alone Can See by hipps13
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Description
Loneliness
Lonely alone
Loneliness inside
Rips where it hurts
In-between will it cry
Where are the words
Eyes to look upon
A shoulder to snug
As tears begin to fall
Emptiness is missing
Loneliness that consumes
Even when those around
Inside cannot breathe
Sometimes is blind
Alone in the dark
So many pieces
Will love learn to see?
Look to the stars
How many there are
One, two, three...
A road grabs hold
Eyes peek through
Take a dip in the clouds
Hello little blossom
Shake the sweet tears
Colors will explain
You will
Be okay
Inside...
Is you
So much is in
Out there to speak
_____________________
A moment in need
Disappointment could see
A set up for me
You told me to write
One about this...
The difference between
"Alone" and "Loneliness"
A good question
You taught me to see
Thank you TP
Thanks for caring
I like your "winks"
*Image Bryce 5.5
©LKS 2007
Comments (17)
B_PEACOCK
VEry cool looking image Love ;) As always your writing is superb and deep/Love ya
carlx
Gorgeous abstract image!!! I like the colors and mats!!!
Bossie_Boots
Wonderful words quite sad and your image is fantastic superb work hugs lou x
sessan53
Very great work on this picture and your writing is superb:-)hugs sessan
Richardphotos
as the song says "one is the loneliness number you will ever see". beautiful words Linda and abstract
TallPockets
THANKS, kind soul, for your wonderful words and work! MUCH appreciated. Now, sing along with old, grumpy TallPockets .... "When you wish upon a star .... makes no difference WHO you are" .... WINK .... My best to you and yours, TallPockets.
auntietk
I love the shape, and the dark, deep colors you've chosen for your image today. The color seems to go well with your words today, my friend.
wawadave
like that blue texture!!!
MUSEWORX
Very nice abstract work and the words is beautiful!
NekhbetSun
Great abstract work Linda...and you defined so well the difference between "alone" and "loneliness"....well done, both ! ~ Hugs ~
abstractix
Very nice, my friend. Remember when I said I like pieces that make you think? This does that for me. :)
Denys234
Beautiful!!
ARTWITHIN
Magnificent image, Linda. There is something fascinating about your poem and your image. When I view your image, I get a feeling of hope and non-resistance. Your words have a sadness to them. However, when I take your words to your image, the sense of your words are changed by your image. Wonderful work in both. Hugs and bright smiles, Suzanne
Tanglimara
Superb image, simple but brilliant ... and those words are beautiful, thanks for making my day that little bit better.
CarolSassy
Sad 'n' lovely words! Lovely image! (:
vaggabondd
interesting image :)
lizzibell
nice work....