Can You Hear Me Now? by samhal
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Description
I found this phone in the freebie section and loved it immediately! My first thought was H.G. Wells Time Machine (hence the background picture). The mouse was a very last minute addition...just because. : ) Rendered in C4D.
But...there's just something compositionaly about this render that bothers me...I just don't know what it is. Maybe someone can point it out for me.
Anyway thanks for looking!!
Comments (16)
Morgan12
awwwso cute! The little rat ^^
Kattey
Amazing picture. About composition... just for me this big yellow disc at left can be a bit off ^^" Thank you for the picture. P.S. I'm unable to find this phone in freebies section ^^"
Denys234
Excellent image!!
Krid
..real fantastic scene...
thebasstard
Back to Normannic age. Six month left to influence the Battle of Hastings... Excellent scene! Can´t see anything wrong on it.
ontar1
Excellent scene and composition excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rogervd
Great looking scene. Like Kattey write, the backpic is not the right choice, i mean.
thecytron
Awesome rendering!
Monuli
Amazing clear render ! ~ wow ~ Love the mouse.
dcatwell
I looked to see what event happened 24 April 1066. Halley's Comet appeared at this time in England and was felt to be a bad omen. The comet's appearance in 1066 was recorded on the Bayeux Tapestry. Also Chaco Native Americans in New Mexico recorded this 1066 event in their petroglyphs Anyways, nice composition!
Sivana
That´s a real fantastic done close up from the old phone!! I´m impressed!!
Danceswithroos
LOl so very cute! And the technical side of the render is awesome too!
PhilW
Excellent model, excellent clear render, and the inclusion of the mouse is inspired!
zfigure7
Just hope that little creature won't get zapped. Nice details and texture work!
liesh519
Great image with a lot of details. Especially the textures you used.
Rutra
Very nice render. Clean and sharp. Compositionally, there are two things that, IMVHO, could be improved: a) the top crop was made too low, immediately above the phone, I think it would be better if it was a bit higher b) the phone (which is the main focus of attention) is in the exact center of the image, whereas according to the "books of composition", the object in focus shouldnt be in the center. I think compositionally it would have been better to place the phone further on the right, to visually balance with the background. As it is now, the picture is unbalanced (more visual "weight" on the left).