Gazing woman by Alextron115
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Description
my first real render ever, comment please and ways to improve
p.s. i drew in the hair in photoshop and i also drew in the eyes.
Comments (5)
lethalliam
Wow awesome start and welcome to rendo. :)
Khory_D
Really excellent start! Your lighting is excellent though you may want to try shadows at some point. They can add that extra something sometimes. I'm a bit uncomfortable with her left leg but that could be the pov. The rest of her pose is outstanding however.
amirapsp
Welcome my dear art friend. Looks great. If you need help, let me know ok? Hugs
Alextron115
i know the leg is a bit off,but i wanted to close the space in between both legs near the crotchbecause it looked like one leg was 50 pounds les then the others.
enigma-man
You asked for some ways to improve. I agree with Khory D as to the use of shadows. Shadows will add depth to the image and not make the character look like she's floating. Also, spotlights can help illuminate the character and add mood to the image. Not bad for a first start. Stop by my gallery and see what I have done using Poser 4. It's mostly comic style panels, but you can learn a lot.