the sun, the boats, again ... by olivier158
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Hey everybody !
I was not happy with the first version of 'boats/sun playing...', so i try another postwork. Not sure sure again, i feel it better.
I would like to thanks my dear Zorg for his sincerity and his help about this picture.
Constructive critique is ALWAYS a good thing !! Refuse it, is like stoping self evolution.
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Salut tout le monde !
Je n'étais pas content avec la première version de 'boats/sun playing...', je l'ai donc retravaillée.
Toujours peu certain, mais je la sens mieux !
Je voudrais remercier Zorg pour sa sincérité dans son aide à propos de cette photo.
La critique constructive est TOUJOURS une bonne chose ! qu'on se le dise !! La refuser est synonyme de stagnation.
Comments (9)
TwistedMentat
I agree with you the postwork in this version is much better,it places greater emphasis on the people creating a stronger,more focused image..a very nice atmospheric capture:)
Zorg1955
C'est incontestable ! Ce cadrage resserré est parfait et met encore plus en valeur certains éléments comme la chaise vide à gauche et surtout cette "nostalgique" petite charrette sur laquelle sont posés les bateaux à louer ...Well done Olivier ;-)
Janiss
La revoili, la revoila... et PARFAITE! Un sujet intéressant, un éclairage superbe et un N§B bien contrasté... que rajouter sinon... 20/20 m'sieur Olivier!o)
Onslow
Yes, I like this postworked version better than the first one. The ideal shot for me would have been closer, or used a telephoto to capture just the people and the cart with boats on it. I don't see what the building to the left with the chair add to the scene, the pushchair and mother on the right is a whole new subject imho and not a part of this one. Ideally I would have shot this just to include the two people looking at the boats and the cart itself. Of course we would all do things differently which is what makes our images so interesting, I congratulate you on capturing a nice moment and a great play of light through the sails and it is a super image for this.
RobyHermida
NICE.............
mark.spooner
Nice work.
Dianthus
I love this version better also. Shows the people and the boats more. But i feel the building on the left is little distracting. For I surely would have loved to see the boats and people more. Amazing place you live in Oliver:)
Mondwin
Vraiment une merveille!!!!!!!!bravissimo!:DDD.Ciao..
alhak
i still like the boats.....