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T'Pol for V4 mk03 (wip)

Critique Science Fiction posted on Nov 28, 2007
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The quest for a V4 incarnation of T'Pol from the series Star Trek: Enterprise, continues... I wanted to show how she looks raw, so there's no postwork here, I made the composite by rendering the right side image, making it the poser background, changing camera and then rendering the facial closeup. The skin texture is the same as last time (the one made by Porthos), I just used some different shaders and added a little AO to the lights (also by Porthos). Since the mark 02 version I've put a body together for her mainly using Wyrmmaster's V3 Sexy Slayer magnets and a 0.200 setting on the v4 "definition" morph. I've also made the face a little thinner on the x-axis (as pre Cujoe Da Man's comments) and made the jaw a little wider to lessen the heart shape to her face. There's still a catsuit texture to work on (though I think I got the basic fabric down) and there's that little bit on the back of the neck that's still giving me problems (likely from the neck magnet). Any critiques/comments/suggestions are welcome. I should note though that I had reservations about making her this thin on the z-axis, but looking at some reference pics I'm not too far off, Jolene is/was a thin woman. Maybe it's a vulcan thing...

Comments (30)


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drifterlee

11:51PM | Wed, 28 November 2007

Wonderful job!!!!!

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Giolon

12:22AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

She's looking closer and closer... While her lips should be full and pouty, her bottom lip is looking a little too square, and not quite enough thickness on the upper lip. Finally, the bridge of her nose is flaring outwards a tad much. When I look at Jolene's face, the sides of the bridge of her nose are quite well defined, and not so much an even slope. It helps make her nostrils more defined. If you need I can mark up this image for you where I see these problems. In any case, she's looking very, very good. I like that cloth material!

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RBlue

12:41AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Hope to see a more refined rendition, soon.

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countessa_jay

12:59AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

very good likeness to her

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Antonio57

12:59AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Excellent personnage!!!!!!!!!!

jdehaven

1:03AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Great progress, I think Giolon's comments are applicable. Tough thing, nailing down the looks of a real person with a 3D mesh, but you are well on the way I would say!

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DocMikeB

1:06AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Awesome portrait of the best Vulcanian girl of ever! 5+++++ and favorite!

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Gor111

2:52AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Oh she looks fantastic in her catsuit! Wonderfully done with this light!!!

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jif3d

3:46AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Looking very T'pol like now, yeah it's tricky to make a real person...my Marlene took ages and still didn't look quite right ! Well done so far & ~Cheers~ :o)

kbobbitt

4:51AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

She's looking terrific so far - can't wait to see how your work progresses!

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danamongden

6:47AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

She's looking pretty good, but the lower lip looks a little too big, or too wide.

GuabaMan

7:41AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

You're almost there! Great work!

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OrphanedSoul

8:05AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Well her mouth is perfect! but other than that she is very close to being complete, seems her eyes are a bit dark to me.

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JCD

8:31AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

I can't even begin to try and replicate a character like you've endeavored on here, so all I can say is that she's definitely very close. I recently watched the series in marathon mode and realized that I've got absolutely nothing against a hot Vulcan girl and based purely on that, you've done a bang up job ;) Can't wait to see how she turns out!

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cole4965

8:37AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

She's hard to do as you and I both know but you are getting there my friend! I really like her!!!

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krouser

10:43AM | Thu, 29 November 2007

WOW! awesome work dude! one small thing i would change is her bottom lip, a bit more rounder is all but other then that WOW! A+ 5

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MajinBoo

3:56PM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Excellent progress I can't really say anything about her facial features that hasn't already been said but it's still good and the body morph fits the actual pretty well.

shipmanjonathan

4:05PM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Awesome work!! Gotta give her a try out!

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Porthos

4:31PM | Thu, 29 November 2007

You've almost nailed her, you got much closer than I did. Her body shape is spot on, I would thicken the top lip and narrow the bottom lip a very slight tad. All in all a terrific job - well done!

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ontar1

5:49PM | Thu, 29 November 2007

Beautiful character, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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jwiest

1:05AM | Fri, 30 November 2007

Looks quite good to me. :)

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magnus073

12:04PM | Fri, 30 November 2007

Wonderful work on her my friend, you really put in the time it is clear to reach this goal.

Denys234

12:15PM | Sat, 01 December 2007

Excellent image!!

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meselfr

8:24AM | Sun, 02 December 2007

awesome character..... sweet pic :)

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Richardphotos

8:45PM | Sun, 02 December 2007

she is my favorite all time actress for the Star trek series. impressive realism and you really got her expression down

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Rainbowgirl

2:43AM | Tue, 04 December 2007

She looks really good!

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Beniu

1:41AM | Thu, 06 December 2007

Fantastic character! Lips are great! Superb my Friend.

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PoserHobbit

1:11PM | Fri, 07 December 2007

Look'n good!

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three_grrr

10:36PM | Sun, 23 December 2007

Wowzer! Awesome work on her! I agree with those who think the bottom lip is a tad too square, it should be rounded a bit, and maybe a teensy more fullness on the top lip. Dang, though, she's darn close to being perfect!! I don't see anything else I'd want to change!

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KatesFriend

9:05PM | Sun, 20 January 2008

You've got the 'look' T'Pol had that's for sure. But her bearing seems less self assured than it should be. Another point, being Vulcan T'Pol would not blush as we might. Most Poser skin textures want to do that in some way of coarse. Something to look into. Otherwise she's a wonderful characterization.


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