AoCK: Betrayal Part 6/6 by Dream9Studios

Poser • Comics/Cartoons • posted on Dec 03, 2007

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And in the end... A little different, eh? The next one will be a bit different as well and will take me a few more days than expected to finish. The next adventure is a bit of a visual treat so I want to spend a little more time on all of the postwork including a few effects I've never done before. I hope you enjoyed this adventure as much as I did making it. Thank you so much for all of your comments. They help me improve my art and get motivated to make more. :) Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5

Comments (3)

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drace68

10:56AM | Mon, 03 December 2007

Yes, different. The first image of this panel needs to be ramped up: show more of the amulet(3/4 view?), and send the force beams all the way to the bad girl (Ms Archer), maybe even splatter against her, IMO. With Wu draped over the saddle, her body could stand a tad of bulking up - she looks like a dishrag - yes, your figures are spare, but please call more attention to Wu on the ride to the gravesite. Awaiting the next adventure.

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enigma-man

9:09PM | Mon, 03 December 2007

When you're on a roll, you're on a roll... :) Constructive comments are far better than some of the ones that I see. At some point we all must face death as a loss of a loved one or friend. Well portrayed in the last two frames. Yeah, the first frame could be this or that, but this is being presented as entertainment and it is first rate. Each panel shows progress in the learning curve that will set a distinctive style. You won't have to put your name on your images. People who know your work can't be fooled. After you head back to college C & B will go on an "Indy-Anna Jones" adventure of their own. I did a few panels about a year and a half ago.

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