Thoughts Outside by hipps13
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Inside Thought
Eyes look ahead
Brain waves move
Gentle swift push
Lights inside
Holes in deeps
Parts engraved
In sand and soul
Does it matter?
Lies within
Tears to follow
Hearts inside
Pushed away
Not intended
Simply accepted
What it is life?
Soft spoken words
So much inside
Cries outside
Runs through express
Fleeting moment
Like lightening
Hunger strikes
Spirits inside
So many tears
So many years
Catching up
With each other
Must be outside
Inside of me
Thoughts outside
Inside thought
*Image Bryce 5.5
Gorilla DAZ 3D
©LKS 2007
Sweet day with a smile to you
Thank you so much
Comments appreciated
Warm hug, Linda
Comments (28)
carlx
Excellent modern composition!!!
auntietk
"So many tears, so many years catching up with each other" Wow. Beautifully written.
Darkwish
Very well done!
djfilms
Very striking! well done.
Ionel
Splendid image, Linda! Excellent work! And I know the answer: Life is everything! :)
bugatti
Nice
Richardphotos
that is really a beautiful creation.akin to modern art and the gorilla face adds so much to your art
abstractix
Very nice, my friend. I also like the modern feel to this. :)
artaddict2
I really love this Linda ! very cool image Hugs.
HeartsRender
Super image very well done!
ARTWITHIN
I like looking at your images as part of your poems. Together they speak beyond your intentions, or maybe it is the universal consciousness that comes through at times. In this work, I feel a primordial sense that moves from a beginning point and spreads out to touch all lives. Some may not be in touch with this internal/external struggle, other acutely aware. The sense of a shared journey is conveyed beneath the words. Beautiful work in image and words. Hugs and big smiles, Linda. Suzanne
awadissk
very nice
NekhbetSun
Quite the wonderful image here, Linda...really....cool poem too ! ~ Hugs ~
B_PEACOCK
Cool looking image sweety.I like what Art said and I have to agree.Huge Hugs
Bossie_Boots
Yesilikewhat Art says to and to understand Linda's poems thisone is so emotional and your image is sensational superb work hugs lou x
MUSEWORX
Both interesting and very fascinating render Linda! Superb poem too!
TallPockets
Old T.P.'s brain waves haven't MOVED in YEARS. WINK. LOVELY work and words! T.P.
angel_dust
Truley awesome image!! great job!!
nazul
Your combination of mats and objects are unique - great job
stevey3d
Fantastic Image Linda! The textures are superb! The red flowers add a wonderful focal point! Lovely! 5++
Denys234
Awesome!!
SunsetHunter
What a wonderfully surreal image - lovely textures, strange shapes and the gorilla head is so cool! I think Artwithin's comments said it perfectly about your words: "The sense of a shared journey is conveyed beneath the words" - Well done!
Tanglimara
Wow, brilliant design and image. Tony :-)
CarolSassy
Lovely poem! Beautiful stone sculpture! Can't believe flowers grow there! lol q-: Excellent work! (:
watifeye
Love the contours and surrealism, your words are so wonderful. Excellent work. Big hugs .
lizzibell
very nice work...
vaggabondd
Very nice writing my poet friend
photostar
Was viewing your gallery of works today, and had to stop and comment on this one. The way you have meshed together the 2 torus objects and then surfaced them with a concrete mat is outstanding. The lighting really heightens its effect as well and the inclusion of the red in the background center adds the perfect touch.