Morning Visit II by billiest
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sweet little fly by....
garyandcatherine
Since you selected to receive criticism then may I point out a few things that caught my eye. First, it is a really cool image but could use some improvements in the following areas: 1. The ships are almost the same size. Cloned, repositioned and thats it. If there were a little more size diffenence in them it would create a greater impression of scale and depth to the scene. 2. It appears as if they are casting shadows on your volumetric clouds, which would not be accurate. Maybe you want to either disable cast shadows on the ships or disable receive shadows on the clouds. 3. The bump on the ships appears a little rough or too much. I know this seems like some extreme nit picking but in reality they are rather small points that really detract from a great image. The clouds, ground props and ecosystem are just fantastic. The whole image is rather well done with the exception of just these small, and I mean small, issues.
R_Cadia
Fantastic render, beats what I can do in vue. very welldone.
flashone
"Let me get this straight, you guys travelled 600 million light years to barrow a cup of sugar and some deck chairs to live in her spot!
Silgrin
I agree about ship texturing. What about more bright ones? They could look more massive. And regarding their size, I would suggest placing several examples of another, smaller type instead of cloning and resizing the same design. More joy and more effect! The clouds look very good! And the tower reminded me of the idea of docking a dirigible (airship) to a tower or a skyscraper [http://pl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grafika:ZR3_USS_Los_Angeles_upright.jpg]. Looking fwd your next renders:)
thecytron
Xcellent Sci-Fi rendering!
bluehermit
Like the ship design. The towers are intriguing.
SeigMancer
Very awesome. Great ships they looks extremely massive! The towers piercing above the clouds really add to the scale of this scene. Not to mention the pyramids below ;) Excellent render overall. 5!
deci6el
I'm gonna disagree with garyandcatherine, if a ship that size flew over a cloud, it would cast a shadow. I've seen it as I looked out of the plane. My one recommendation would be to turn on some anti-aliasing as the lack of it is what's hurting this picture the most. Sure, it'll make your render longer but worth it if you're going to post something that isn't a WIP.
katy555
Beautiful fiction and light, nice work...