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Bryce Science Fiction posted on Jan 05, 2008
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A piece I did to send to a weekly sci fi magazine. Do you think it looks professional enough to send out, or is it too amateurish? Thanks for viewing and commenting.

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photostar

7:35AM | Sat, 05 January 2008

Quite a remarkable and imaginative render. detail work is awesome...shadows, lighting, domed cities in background. Only change I would suggest is a bit of a water stream underneath the covered bridge. Personally, I don't think it is amateurish at all. Very well done.

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debz

8:38AM | Sat, 05 January 2008

This is a great image, and I don't think it amateurish at all. Well worth sending in!! Love the spheres with the buildings inside, very different!! Very well done!!

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TheBryster

3:19PM | Sat, 05 January 2008

Well the timber on the roof and decking has the grain running the wrong way. Needs to be rotated 90degrees. The horse has a great pose but needs work to make its coat look more like hair than plastic (try grabbing a texture from the freebies) Lose the plants at the edge of the decking and replace with a muddy track or tarmac road. It looks like you've textured some of the bridge uprights but ignored others and I agree with Photostar about the stream. You might also consider changing the bog-standard Bryce sky for something a lot more interesting. On the whole a very good effort with great design and composition. Please don't be put off by my suggestions, they are only that, suggestions.

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TheBear005

6:03PM | Sat, 05 January 2008

I think this going in the right direction to convey your idea. I'd suggest the same tweaks as the above others have suggested. But, this is a great concept. Not "amatureish" at all.

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ShadowsNTime

5:38AM | Sun, 06 January 2008

Very interesting and well rendered image! I like the concept very much and I think its a great scifi work. I agree that a stream beneath the bridge would be good. Thanks so much for your visit and comment on Powwow Inspired, also for the reminder about Give Aways! And indeed its sad that everything has become so commercialized but I do think the 'gathering' is still important to native culture. Lynn

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R_Cadia

7:12PM | Mon, 21 January 2008

Excellent render work!


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