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Wow the last few pages have taken a lot of time, I'm not sure if the effort has paid off but I'm happy with them so far. I've struggled a bit with writing lately so I�m writing in what all parents go through with teenagers so it should be a bit of fun. I'm also putting in the typed script of the page. Some good friends have asked me, so it helps them with reading and translations. Well thanks for the honest comments. I would like to say we are at the halfway point but I honestly don't know I know how it ends just getting there is the problem. I've also got to fit in the second part of nothing but time so a lot to do. So hang in there the journey continues.
Ok what�s
wrong now?
I know that look.
You, you're
What's wrong? Sitting here
Playing dr Frankenstein,
While david is about to
Be killed.
I am going to get
Him, I love him and
There�s nothing in the
Universe that is going to
Stop me. Not you not Lucifer
Not anything, will keep
us apart.
You don't even
Know what love is.
I forbid it.
Comments (12)
sim3344
Great comic,nice story.Excellent work!!!
saithan
The pages look very very good. the soft glow of the lights while still holding a toon look. It has a heavy metal magazine feel (one of my favorite magazines since the mid 70s). a bit more refined from the standard lite paper stock comic and moves to the glossy graphic novel style like. marvel graphic novel #23 Dr Strange: Shambahla
e-brink
Very nice style here!
McAfee2000
I agree with saithan it does have the more Heavy Metal feel with the new style. The scripting is fine, and in a way very ironic if you think about it. Well done.
markon
It does have a Heavy metal feel to it. Still not sure that I like the toon shading but excellent layout and composition. Great scripting. Very well done.
ldgilman
Excellent story, and you have certainly got the toon look. I liked her looks much better way back when she first appeared.
RBlue
The intricate work shows up well. It looks like it took as long to make as you say! The Airbrush additions add a deeper dimetion to the images. A very good page! Heavy Metal, all the way!
thip
Heavy Religion, not just Heavy Metal ;o) New version of the Fall from Grace? And hey, you can't tease us like that - if Lucifer's around, we wanna meet him! This is eye candy AND mind candy, keep it up!!!
MajinBoo
I like the scripting too but as I was looking at "daddy's" suit I notice the markings on it looked very familiar.
Steff_7
Excellent panels and great pallettes. Difficulty writing, I can empatize with you there my friend. I get ideas but the image doesn't work and have to re-invent the art to accomidate. No pain no gain...lol Excellent work...
Madbat
This has a very interesting look to it, defiineatly Heavy Metal in feel, nicely done! Personally, I find the hardest part about writing a story is coming up with the dratted story.
violet
You go girl...tell him like it is...!!