Spirit Clean Shine by hipps13
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Description
Visions Inside
Spat went the urban
Full service sparks plugs
Innovative is in rural
Split second in mid air
Oil change service
Travels in spirits
Blooms as it drifts
Watch as it glides
Sun drinking shine
Different some how
See in mind eyes
Morning sun rise
Stare inside soul
Lip chewing thoughts
Visions in yellow
Frozen parts stuck
Melt drawer warm
Comfort heart sore
Brown spots are scars
Poke a dots connect
Daisy will restore
Sometimes it seems
Inside is the cure
Surface each one
Tuff spots ahead
Tender is when ready
Handle with care
Places find terms
Pictures come closer
Clearer deep thoughts
Eyes “mister clean”
Mop squeeze and wipe
Flavors the green
*Image Bryce 5.5
©LKS 2008
Had an eye opener
Critical comments welcome
They may hurt at first
but then a smile will appear
Thank You
Warm hug to all
Comments (27)
stevey3d
Superb image! Wonderful lighting and concept! 5+
ansgar2
Cool....
Bossie_Boots
Lovely image Linda love your writing as always so deep superb work hugs loux
MUSEWORX
Truly great food for thought Linda! Ironicly it seems that South Africa is the first country to have used electric lights before candle light! Guess we have to adapt ourselves to living backwards instead of forwards! Great imagery once more! Muis
ledwolorz
Fantastic colors and lighting.beautiful work.
buzz-69
i love the light shining under the table ;o) once again a beautifully creative image with wonderful poetry too ;o)
carlx
Gorgeous surreal scene and mood!!!
photostar
Super modeling work on the side table, Linda. I really love the various lenghts of the legs. And that ever-blooming red rose.
OrphanedSoul
Cool image!
nazul
Great idea :-)
Richardphotos
that is the real mesa (table top). very surreal and cool work
NekhbetSun
A bit of surreal, eh :o) ....and my critical comment??? ....well, here it is,,,you've come a long way with this Bryce, Linda, and you're doing an excellent job ! ....keep it up :o)
angel_dust
Cute scene!!
lizzibell
nice work...
B_PEACOCK
I ahev to agree you have come a long way.Pretty sureal looking image Lin.Fantastic writing also love
densa
wonderful realization love the concept
Electralena
Great surreal composition. Very cool, Linda!!!
thales
xcellent artwork and fantastic compo... very well done
2Loose2Trek
Beautiful words and image ... very nice composition.
auntietk
Wow. I love what you've done with the visual pun of the tabletop rock and the table and the rock and ... very cool! :) The way you did the legs on that coffee table, all intersecting with the rock in different ways, is fabulous. Good stuff!
artaddict2
Oh wow table mountain ! imaginative piece of surreal artwork and words, makes me want to go clean the Flat/apartment. Warm hugs, Alan
Burpee
When I read this I think of cars but our table needs to be shined too. I'm looking for symbolism in this image, with the two legs hidden and the flowers around the table. Cool surealism here.
Erynn
Fantastic work my friend :) Sorry for late comment, my cold got much heavier than I thought..
Darkwish
Impressing work! EXT!
SSoffia
BEAUTIFUL WORK !!!!!
vaggabondd
Nice artwork my friend :)
abstractix
Very nice, Lin. As is usual in your words, there's one that stands out (the 5th stanza down in this case). At least in my mind anyway. :)