underwater crash scene_2 by Animatrix_09

Maya • Sea/Undersea • posted on Feb 07, 2008

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Hi guys, I've uploaded this second test of my underwater crash scene, your comments are greately appreciated to improve my work. thanks guys!

Comments (13)

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DarkStormCrow

5:30AM | Thu, 07 February 2008

Great looking scene , maybe just a bit more light should filter through so you can see the wreckage a bit better otherwise excellent image well done...

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NefariousDrO

5:47AM | Thu, 07 February 2008

Dark and mysterious! In a way, I'd like to see a little more details, but I'm usure of that. I like it that it's so vague and uncertain, so maybe a little scattered debris? I think it looks awesome, in any case.

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kuerbote

7:16AM | Thu, 07 February 2008

Looks better than the last one, for sure. Now you might wanna try and destroy the plane a little...

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Digimon

2:01PM | Thu, 07 February 2008

The under water effects are great! Perfect! The point of view is interesting, but I think it is too close to the ground, the texture is not good enought to hold up to this kind of closeup. Try lifting the camera slightly off the bottom, and zoom into the plane a bit more, after all, the plane is the subject of your composition. The others are right, it is too dark. I will check on my monitor at home, but here at work, I can not see the plane at all. I had to open it in photoshop and adjust the levels to see anything, and the levels were clearly off. You are really doing a great job trying different things, changing the elements, etc.. keep up the good work, it will improve!

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Radar_rad-dude

8:13PM | Thu, 07 February 2008

I too think you are gaining great expertise as you continue on your quest for rendering perfection. Call me a litterbug, but I wouldn't mind seeing perhaps a little sea weed growth or something similar on the bottom, and perhaps some kind of sea life swimming by just to give the scene a little more contrast. Just a suggestion! Great job and I love how you are progressing! Thanks for sharing your learning experience with us!

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shvrdavid

4:44AM | Fri, 08 February 2008

Now your on to something... The lighting and the particles in the water look great... I like how dark it is, it adds to the effect...

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mikeerson

5:44AM | Fri, 08 February 2008

It does have that underwater murky look. I like it. I liked the first image better. This style picture would be could to throw a blur in here and there and make objects focused in, like a shark head coming through the mist at you.

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