I Get Such A Fever by vaggabondd
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Description
When ever I am around you
I get such a fever
I can hardly remember anything
Help me lover
I have to know
Did I hold your hand
Did I look into your eyes
Did I touch your hair
Did I smell your neck
Did I whisper I love you
Did I kiss your lips
Did we dance under the moon light
Lover I have to know
Did I tell you I can’t live without you
Comments (8)
Aioros
It is a very beautiful picture my friend
Bossie_Boots
Wonderful romantic poem and superb image hugs lou x
durleybeachbum
Well! so you are also a poet! great stuff!
Syltermermaid
Which woman would not love to hear this words, also if you said it before!!:o) Wonderful poem again!!!! Marvelous!! Hugs Ute
auntietk
Wow. That's great! Very well done, my friend. Nice setup, the repetition has a nice rhythm, and the break at the end, highlighting the most important line, is perfectly done. What a sweet bit of writing!
beachzz
This is great, who wouldn't want to hear this??
ccbig
Wonderful prose! The fever of love, may there be no cure!
experimental
Yes, it must be written for song now :) I truly enjoyed your take on an old familiar feeling