Lover's Rendezvous **WIP** My first post! by jaytonh1
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This is my first post. This is a work in progress, and I can definitely use some constructive criticism. (G:;
Figure is Girl Next Door by Blackhearted
Pose also from Blackhearted (w/ a few modifications by me)
Skin is Selyne by Blackhearted
Lingerie by Billy-T
Alice Hair by Kozaburo
Face is my work from a character I'm working on.
Special thanks to Elysium for posting the fantastic Cloister in Freestuff!!
Lighting by me (HELP!!!) I was trying to produce an effect that would look like torch sconces, but obviously, I failed. Please pick this apart as much as you want, so long as you're willing to give some input on how to make it better. Thanks!!
Comments (6)
jaytonh1
Oh, I almost forgot. Among the many things in this picture that need help is the water in the fountain. If anybody knows of any tutorials that may help me "liven" this up, please let me know! Thanks!
ladydawg
Hey pretty good. To get a torch look, the best way I can think of to get a sconce of some kind put a spotlight right up on that wall on and 40 degree angle up and adjust the lighting to get what you want, then the rest can be touched up in postwork. As for the water in the fountain... Send me an e-mail at ladyblue@ladyblue.org , and I'll show you how I did the water in Richabri's fountain in my gallery.
jaytonh1
Did I mention that comments would be welcome? lol (G:; --TJ--
DreamstoGo
welcome to the poser world of addiction!!! great start!!
Blackhearted
looks great - love that lighting and the wicked expression on her face. looks like you updated it and fixed the jpeg compression banding :) i like that little crack on the upper right of the wall you added - little touches like that give it a lot more realism. cheers, -gabriel
jtorgler
I am not a renderer, so I won't be of much help to you... but I do sketch and paint......... don't know how to "lighten" this up, but we would be able to see more of your work if it could be brighter, somehow. :)