NIghtReign page 24 by saithan
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this page was a bit harder to convey the sequences... I hope it works.
anyways thanks,
comment welcome!
Comments (3)
midnight_stories
Hey like the swirl and smoke in the last panel. Just a little advice don't have you character looking so much like the background or they become invisible and the reader losses focus. I like the sound effects, something I should use more often. Anyway still moving along nicely keep them coming.
RBlue
I agree with Midnight.. I like the story pace but I had to really scrutinize the first frame to understand what I was looking at. Whenever I suspect a panel of such a charge, I try to isolate the elements with either changing the camera angle and repeating the rendering process or post effect contrast the foreground to background. Maybe reducing the ink line background effect. But everything else works excellently. The text sound effects work really well!
chsmo
I like the swirl as well. It has an ethereal look to it... almost glowing. Keep it coming- you've got great narration going on there.