Still Awake by beachzz

Writers • People • posted on Feb 23, 2008

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Still Awake It's late And I should Go to sleep Get some rest But no my brain Just keeps going Makes me think Keeps me awake I get all these ideas All these thoughts I have these dreams And I'm not asleep I dream of the perfect Life full of everything Good and full of Happy times and I dream of the perfect Place the place that Soars that takes Me to That spot in my heart That's still not quite Full but has so Much to give So I'm awake Dreaming of all Kinds of things My mind just flows Until finally My body takes Over and I sleep And really dream Of so many things 2/22/08

Comments (14)

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Thelby

3:37AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

Lovely words and photo!!!

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Mad-Mike

3:38AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

Very nice one Marilyn dear! well I have an excuse why I am always awake these wee hours.... eXtreme insomnia! lol but I do not mind, I get more productive theses hours... yes I am for sure a night owl lol :-) Very beautiful photo I see! :-) have a great weekend! Heard the weather in the Bay Area is going to get hammered very hard by rains and such pretty soon! lol fun times ^_^ hugsssss

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mickuk50

4:04AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

that pic marilyn is awesome and it matches your words perfectly .excellent work :o) mick

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photostar

4:36AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

Yep, I do my best work at the wee hours of the morning, as well. Great photo to remind us that as nature sleeps, we're still awake trying to recreate her artistic beauty.

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JeffG7BRJ

8:12AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

I'm with Mick, a perfect picture to go with these profound words. The image has a dreamlike quality to it the prose really is very good. The two of them go together so well, it makes me think of the constelation Gemini! Excellent work. Bravo!!!!!5++++

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vaggabondd

9:22AM | Sat, 23 February 2008

Beautiful work my friend. if I didn't have dreams I would die, sometimes they are the only thing that keeps me going. Very Very Nice work again

CaressingTheDark

2:54PM | Sat, 23 February 2008

Simply beautiful

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goodoleboy

5:39PM | Sat, 23 February 2008

The dreams consist, among other things, of shoes and ships and sealing wax, of cabbages and kings. You realize that even though the body sleeps, the brain never does, which is why we dream. This includes other mammals, as well. Anyway, in addition to your eloquent prose, I love the mystic blue image.

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