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DELIRIUM

Writers People posted on Feb 25, 2008
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DELIRIUM " ... Blue moon ... " Midnight on the sun-terrace, by Prestatyn's shore, shiver slips to sweat, frost to flame. Ague - an archaic word for old bones in an aging frame. A rusting fence and a forlorn flagpole supports my body's slump, my rambling thoughts scaffolded by a tired refrain wired in a lunatic loop " ... you saw me standing alone ... " Up, in the black on black on black night sky a single light lifts my eyes: the moon, itself a pallid scuffed disc, has gained an iridescent aura within a gilded circlet edged electric blue. I raise my glass of blue moon to view and the nacreous pinks and peaches wink violet and blue and eau-de-nil. A toast to you my Cyclops moon! The ice cubes clink applause in tune to my shaking hand. Below, tired from the far transatlantic fetch, and the tumult of the turbulent Irish Sea, the surf stumbles and slips on the shingle. The crests are barely seen - a deep slate blue against the unrelenting darkness save for the intermittent wink of a ship describing the lost horizon. Even the wave-tip's voice is muted an echo of the sluggish viscid tides of my silted clogged-up lungs. Another cerulean toast to distant seas and warmer lands. " ... without a dream in my heart ... " Behind me, sensed rather than seen, the great bulk of Snowdonia hulks and leans towards the shore though in truth it seems more a guardian than a threat. The fever hits again and sweat breaks out to mingle with the ice of the sea's salty spray, A shiver strikes up the band of ice cubes. Silence again. Then the sharp clear crack of a dog-fox's bark high up the hill. We wait, him and me, and wait. First faint, then nearer, the vixen's high-pitched triple yip sends an invitation from a leaf-lined earth. One exultant yelp and he sets off dreaming of musky muzzle-tailing, consummation and cosy corner curls with his new companion. Good for you, my totem spirit beast - a blessing and a toast in Luna azuline " ... without a love of my own ... " "Sir ... please!" - even two words betray the Baltic origins of barmaid Chrystiina - with two 'i's in tiina and a 'y' in chrys She turns my face, concern scribed in her eyes and on her scrunched-up brow. She has a pleasant face, round and jolly - but her made-in-Estonia eyes! So pale, hardly even the lightest blue and fringed by frosty white lashes. "Please," she repeats, "You are not well!" She places the back of her hand against my head as a wife or mother would. "So hot!" she chides, "I will bring your drink to your room." "I must get you to bed soon!" I grin. She blushes "Sir, I didn't mean ...!" I assure her that I'll manage fine, and carry my nightcap to my room. Alone. I have a hot date, pre-arranged, with sweet and sensual words - neatly stacked solace for such solitary times as these.

Comments (17)


janedj

5:59AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Beautiful work!!!!!

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RodolfoCiminelli

6:49AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Excellent and beautiful realization Mike.....!!!!

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amirapsp

7:07AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

I am sooooo glad to see you again my dear friend. Where were you? I missed your lovely art. Welcome back. Hugs

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BlueLotus7

7:34AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Mike, your words brought me there by your side. Incredible writing! This is by far my favorite...so far...lol! Keep up the awesome work and I'm sooooo glad you're back!<>

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meico

8:21AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

The "blue moon" drink referrred to is a cocktail of my own devising. A measure of vodka and one of blue curacao over ice in a highball glass, topped up with lemonade, add a few drops of angostura bitters [to cut the sweetness of the lemonade] and stir. It's also the theme song of 'my' football [soccer] club - Manchester City.

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auntietk

8:54AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

I'll have that song in my head all morning! I like the way you've interspersed the lines of the song into the story. Nice writing!

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idiot_sphinx

9:04AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Very clever ! I adore your writing , you certainly know your words. It is sheer pleasure to catch your wonderful poetry here in the gallery !!~BRAVO~!!

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STEVIEUKWONDER

9:53AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Nice one Mike! Glad to see you posting! Steve :o)

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TallPockets

11:18AM | Mon, 25 February 2008

GOAL!!!!!!!!!! (WINK). Excellent work, Meico!! T.P.

Wolfspirit

4:53PM | Mon, 25 February 2008

When I read your words, my mind opens a clean slate, no lingering thoughts trailing about, where as with each word my eyes embrace, immersed I am, and to me that is brilliance. The best part is, it is never far, when I think I need to see it, to be it, I come here to your gallery. Again as always thanks.

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kansas

5:04PM | Mon, 25 February 2008

Ahhh, to be young again. Wonderful words

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mamabobbijo

6:44PM | Mon, 25 February 2008

There was a February challenge, a love poem. I wrote pages to try and convey those last three lines. Well crafted Sirrah!

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D.C.Monteny

7:59PM | Tue, 26 February 2008

Fantastic piece of writing, Mike. as clear as if was sitting there beside you.

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beachzz

2:51AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Oh, this just touches me, I can feel it as though I were there.

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hanevi

3:35AM | Tue, 04 March 2008

Very well written, like a glass of good, old wine.

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DukeNukem2005

4:13AM | Wed, 05 March 2008

Very beautiful and very interesting image.

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leanndra

5:17PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

An image with your written prose that evokes a strong sense of being a solitary person. There is a great sense of separateness here


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