Late Night Thoughts by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Feb 28, 2008

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Late Night Thoughts When it's dark And I'm not asleep And really not Quite awake It's these times When my mind Just wanders Just takes off In all directions It's when I dream Of things That might or might not be It's that time When I can make Them happen Make them be I can see those Things that aren't Quite real Aren't quite true But in that time Of the night They are so good They seem so real And so that's What I do When I'm not asleep And not quite awake It's a dreamy Soft filmy Time of night Those late hours When I'm lying There thinking Dreaming Feeling So many good thoughts dreams 2/27/08 The foto here is actually one my son took a couple of years ago. I did some postwork and borrowed it for a while!!

Comments (20)

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amlondono

2:15AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Love the poem and your son's foto ! Ana

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mickuk50

2:23AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

i think its the best time to think when your in bed when its quiet ,then no one can interrupt your thoughts :o)..excellent marilyn mick

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Mad-Mike

2:23AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Lol good one Marilyn! and I am always at my prime in my wee hours as well lol! fantastic photo he took, and great touch up job with it! have a lovely day when you wake up and take care ;-) Blesses

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Thelby

2:54AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

I did that when I tried to sleep and the house was 28 degrees without the heater, then brain freeze kicked in and I went to sleep!!!!

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carrotsoup

6:17AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

It is a beautiful photo to go with your wonderful poem. What talent you have.

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alhak

6:26AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

late night thoughts, hmmm, i have plenty of those, come up with some good stuff too but usually forget them by morning! lol

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photostar

7:03AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Sometimes, those late night thoughts become my dreams...and some of them are nightmares..lol. Hope yours are thoughts that bring you blue skies and sunny days in the morning. Thanks for sharing your poem and the photo.

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Janiss

8:24AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Great pict and superb poem Marilyn!

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auntietk

8:34AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Mmmmmmmm. This makes me want to go back to bed! I love that drifty feeling, when anything is possible. Wonderfully written!

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JeffG7BRJ

10:21AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Hey are you sure thats your sons pic? It looks like my sand disk a little. lol. Wonderful prose again Marilyn, very profound and oh so true, I have felt that way lots of times but never really thought about it like this. When you see the writen word, quite often it applies to yourself and only when you read it does it bring it to the fore. Excellent poem and the picture is perfect for it. Bravo!!!!!

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RobyHermida

10:25AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Great Work!!

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vaggabondd

10:59AM | Thu, 28 February 2008

mmmmmmmmmmm this makes me want to dream dreams. very nice

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Tanglimara

12:08PM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Beautiful words Marilyn about the best time of the day, I enjoyed reading and re-reading them. Tony :-)

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meico

4:30PM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Nicely written: every word counts to convey the overall mood of misty contemplation and boundless possibilities. Mike

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Chipka

4:42PM | Thu, 28 February 2008

You've captured that feeling perfectly. I love those "twilight moments" when your mind simply wanders where it will and you do actually dream, though you're also partially awake...at least it feels like dreaming. There is always such potential in those moments; you can imagine and plan, or simply relive pleasant moments. It's a great thing, a wonderful thing, and in some ways I wish that all of life could be like that...relaxing...restful...and yet exciting. You've captured that beautifully, and as alway, presented it with pronounced, straightforward grace...and I LOVE the image that goes with it. Fantastic stuff, Marilyn...really top notch!

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JaneEden

4:47PM | Thu, 28 February 2008

Lovely poem and image Marilyn hugs Jane xx

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goodoleboy

6:33PM | Thu, 28 February 2008

When you're worried, and you can't sleep, just listen to some talk radio. Actually, whenever I get in that dreamy-and-musing-in-bed mood, the only thing I can think of is getting up, picking up the phone, and making crank calls to people I don't like. Oh well, to each his own. A fine bit of prose writing there, and nice work on the moon image, Marilyn.

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