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LEGACY

Writers People posted on Mar 13, 2008
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My father was killed at sea in WW2. I never knew him. He was a seaman who saw me once only as a tiny baby on a two-week shore leave. My mother kept his memory alive each night when I was a child. LEGACY Mother's memories crackle, crystallise and coalesce entangled in familiarity and days-end prayer and flesh out well-known bones of oft told tales to make a man for me to love. A restless reckless man who hullabalooed down hairpin-riddled hills amid the war free carefree days in a red and rollicking rooster of a car to the singing swaggering inns of Wales. A loving gentle man who framed a kiss-me face in miner's hands while fear-strained peace hopes upped and fled and tough and tender wooed and wed his willing lass in cool cathedral mountain ferns. A brave and gallant man who, smiling, shoulder slung a sailor's sack of hope in the proud and patriotic duty days to test his pit man's mettle on the sour and sullen seas, and save his wife, his Wales, his world. A tearful frightened man who woke fear-slimed and shrieking from his dreams in pitiful shore-leaves meant to heal and in the sobs of his sick and once-seen son heard blazing screams in ice-bound seas. A careless luckless man who eased his guard in safe and sheltered sunlit seas Caribbean cradled close by the shore; who, laughing, failed to spot the lethal sharking shape which shattered peace and skin and bone. And I shall learn to love this man though speaking 'father' snags my tongue and all his substance but a mother's memory gift seeking a son's echoes among the prayers: Her imagery is my legacy, nevertheless: Good night, God bless.

Comments (18)


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TallPockets

8:18AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

SO good, Mike!! You've SO aptly described MANY a son and father's relationship in similar circumstances. A few years back, when my late father was near his death, I finally realized that although he was my 'father', he was FIRST a HUMAN. With frailities AND good. Your insights and the talents to put them to word always amaze me, my friend. My BEST to you and yours, T.P.

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auntietk

8:34AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

I am struck by so many things, reading this, that I don't know which to mention. The nature of oral history, of legends. The filtering process across generations, and now across the world, for me to get a glimpse of a man's life, which ended 65 years ago. How odd and empty it must have felt to realize your task was to love someone you didn't know. Expectations. Influence. Well. You made an impact. I love the way you write, btw!

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RodolfoCiminelli

8:57AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

This is a very emotional work and that it arrives to the soul so much for the words as the splendid illustration that you had carried out for their poem....!!! My congratulations my friend Mike....!!!!

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beachzz

10:44AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

Oh, what these words bring to mind, that man who is dad, father, papa, the hero figure who we then realize, is after all, human and real. You go so deep with what you write and touch me every single time. The image you created is just as powerful, that little boy left wondering about it all -

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romanceworks

10:51AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

It is not an easy thing when a heart is so broken to piece together all the parts that made your father special. But your mother had the courage, and love for you both, to do this. How wonderful. Your poem brought tears. CC

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hipps13

11:24AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

Hi Mike she must of loved him very much to keep a memory a live a love most only dream about such beautiful words to fit an image that really stands out sweet smile to you warm hug, Linda

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koosievantutte

11:47AM | Thu, 13 March 2008

very touching.

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helanker

12:15PM | Thu, 13 March 2008

OH yes ! That was indeed touching, Mike.

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Blush

3:19PM | Thu, 13 March 2008

Very touching.. And a very emotional poem at that... Loved it... Please forgive the delays in not aswering e bots... Have been in the hospital for about 2 wks so very sick... Love this and you too Hugs Susan~

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Chipka

4:11PM | Thu, 13 March 2008

Brilliantly and tenderly written with an emotional cadence that screams from each of the well-placed lines. So much comes to mind in this piece that I can't even begin to describe any of it, but reading this has been an enriching experience and I'm deeply moved by this. Fantastic work and a perfect tribute!

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Minuano

5:23PM | Thu, 13 March 2008

It's hard to add something from what's already been heartfeltly voiced here. Just makes me wonder how much beauty, intensity and connection you have to express something evocatively eloquent as this. I've read it a few times already and each line resonates. Salut Mike! This is lasting. -Julian

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BlueLotus7

8:59AM | Sat, 15 March 2008

Words from one's heart always heal in time...both your mom's and yours.

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D.C.Monteny

8:49PM | Sat, 15 March 2008

Such a beautiful tribute, i read it and then again and then some more. Thanks Mike,for letting us share into this deeply personal poem.

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amirapsp

8:18AM | Sun, 16 March 2008

Beautiful work well done!!!

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AusPoet

7:07PM | Wed, 26 March 2008

You were truly blessed to have a mother who could paint such a picture for you. And we are truly blessed to have been allowed a moment to share its beauty. Thank you Mike!

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mamabobbijo

6:01PM | Sat, 05 April 2008

She must have loved you very much to have kept him alive for you. Such a touching portrait. Thanks for shring him, and her with us,

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leanndra

3:56PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

This poem struck my heart and brought tears to my eyes. I grew up fatherless, even though he was alive. I understand the sense of loss you must have felt. Your mom must have been a great lady!

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novelist

7:39AM | Wed, 30 April 2008

You are truly a bard. I hope you will publish your poetry someday if you haven't already.


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