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LAMENT

Writers Romance posted on Mar 20, 2008
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THE MAIDEN disappeared for a time yesterday - I accidentally misread and violated the TOS for thumbnails by including the word 'nudity'. I didn't read thoroughly enough and thought I HAD to include the word. Silly me, never mind THE MAIDEN has been re-instated now. Sorry about that! LOVER'S LAMENT I'm half, half, Half in love with reality, And half alive in a dream Dance me a daydream Moon me a moment A moment out of time Sing me some starlight Brighten the dark night To drive this dubiety away So croon me a chronicle Fable a fantasy Fantasize me in the tale And mix me some maybes Purloin some possibles Secure me a certain or two I'm half, half, Half alive in reality And half in love in a dream Half alive in a fantasy Half in love for a dream: In dreams or in this cold hard world I'm wholly in love with you

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RodolfoCiminelli

6:25AM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Fantastic and creative realization my friend......!!!!

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TallPockets

7:36AM | Thu, 20 March 2008

SMILIN' @ Meico. Old T.P. is HALF in LIFE with REALITY. WINK. WOnderfully done and written, my friend! My BEST to you and yours. T.P.

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beachzz

11:05AM | Thu, 20 March 2008

TOS, they can stymie us once in a while, can't they?? These words leave me without any at all~~~~so simple and yet so very, very true, who could not love them!!

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Meisiekind

11:36AM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Mike - this is so touching. You could just as well be writing the poem about me. "half alive in reality, and half in love in a dream." Excellent work my friend!!!! xx

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Minuano

12:11PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Mike - You are a mixer of thoughts and realities in the highest order. The way you put words together and the cadence of your verses are impossibly beautiful ... goes to show, how young our civilization and world still is --- or you would be an icon. I am in awe of this artistry of yours. -Julian

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helanker

2:14PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

SO very sweet and lovely Poem and Image too.

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hipps13

2:34PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Hi Mike such sunshine I see even when one feels silly makes me smile even more Wonderful words beautiful image so much to see thank you for this treat warm hug, Linda

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algra

2:49PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Pure beauty, I love this.

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idiot_sphinx

5:38PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

What a lovely love song ! Excellent !! Also I wish to let you in on a secret ...Everyone at one time or another has difficulties with TOS , you are not alone :) I have had pictures removed and some silly misunderstandings before and I am still here. Don't let it get you down . I for one , would hate to lose your wonderful words and images !! !!~BRAVO~!!

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Blush

8:52PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

Beautiful sweetie Hugs Susan~

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auntietk

12:07AM | Fri, 21 March 2008

How true - love is a place of fantasy and dreams, yet a place where it's a very good idea to keep as much attention as possible in reality! Well said.

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romanceworks

3:27AM | Fri, 21 March 2008

Amazing words. There is nothing that really feels better in reality or fantasy, than loving and being loved. CC

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BlueLotus7

12:25PM | Sat, 22 March 2008

"half alive in reality, and half in love in a dream." Sounds like me, the Lady of Shallot...half sick of shadows, half alive in reality and in love "with" a dream...beautiful work, Mike.

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amirapsp

6:16AM | Tue, 25 March 2008

Cool, excellent work!

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D.C.Monteny

12:52PM | Sun, 30 March 2008

Beauuuuuutiful, Mike!

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leanndra

4:44PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

What they all said Mike. ( I can't add anything better than has already been stated)!

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Heathcroft

3:29AM | Sun, 13 April 2008

Extremely interesting and well created work!


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