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Four Poems about my late son. If you have read them before I will understand if yiu don’t wish to comment again
Rhys took his own life after a fatal overdose of my ex-wife's medication. He died on the day after Boxing Day 2001 aged 29. He left no note, and no clues as to why, although we all have our views.
Rhys 'prepared' us for his death by saying that he was dying of cancer. The post-mortem showed no health problems. During those last 3 months we talked often and long - though he steadfastly refused to let me talk to his doctors who had made the 'diagnosis'. One of the things he demanded of me in our talks was that I soon resume writing and making pictures. He was very concerned that I was too much wrapped in my work to the detriment of my own well-being. He was right, of course, I hadn't done anything creative for over 15 years. He is entirely responsible for me being here on the web, because he brought back some of my artwork and poetry which I had left in the family home some ten years earlier. 'To start you off,' he said. His death was the worse thing I have ever endured. Although most people would have thought him a 'difficult' child - he was clinically hyperactive - I couldn't help but love him dearly.
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YEAR 1: WEBMAKER AND FRIENDS
Spring. Deep sleep in the early hours
jarred awake by the creak-shriek of wood
clinging to fast-embedded nail.
"Who's there?" through the window garage-ward
Silence. Return to sleep.
Morning. Every horizontal garage plank removed
placed, transformed into a little house in the one solid corner.
My small son, smile wavering uncertainly, says,
"It was Wood–den Man, Daddy"
I scowl, feign anger
and smile behind my hand.
Summer. Lightly dozing in the warmth
roused by a shatter-crash of broken glass
splintered on resisting stone.
"What's the matter?" towards my den
"Nothing, Daddy" Continue doze.
Later. In my den a pull-along truck
piled higgledy-piggledy high with locks, catches, handles.
My son, serious and very sincere says
"It was Lobster-man, Daddy"
I growl, feign anger
and smile behind my hand
Autumn. Catching up with admin. tasks
disturbed by a shuffle-scuffle of trainer-shod
feet across the bedroom floor long before bedtime.
"What are you doing?" up the stairs.
"I'm tired, Daddy". Return to work.
Bed-time and my son's room is a mass of wool
woven to an intricate impenetrable web, access for one.
My son, guilt chasing glee, says
"It was Web-maker, Daddy"
I grimace, feign anger
and smile behind my hand.
Winter. More unconscious than asleep
Forced awake by the clamour of the telephone
insistent and I know, I know, I know
"Yes?" a barely audible whisper
"Intensive Care. Come quickly" I run.
In the ward, Wood-den Man, Lobster-man
has followed Web-maker into his cocoon
never to return.
Anger is replaced by grief, unfeigned,
and no smile now.
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YEAR 2: ABOUT FACE
Morning over
The noon sun
squats cold as curdled cream
in a yoghurt sky
powerless to stay the scalpel
of a surgeon wind that flays each facet
of my face and thrums defenceless sinews
exposed and bare.
Escaping the seeping wintry chill
I sink exhausted in a nook of rock
shocking red in a washed-out world.
But enough of this:
this is not the time for purple patches
though the patch is pale and muddy mauve
with lowlights dirty-grey.
This is a time
for ritual exhumation of memories
for assessments of circumstance
and interment of grief.
It is the anniversary of my son’s death
at the picnic-point we both loved.
Here at the Edge he snapped into place
the final pieces of the puzzle
of his father’s life.
Morning over
That vibrant summer of vivid colours
and revelations of violent changes
when three driven children
sought the secret – as they thought –
of the missing years and the scars upon my face.
They’d found a photograph, late teens,
with smooth skin, symmetrical, unmarked
in contrast to their father’s present face:
a mess-mass of centipedes hiding in hair
above a lop-sided lip and tip-tilted chin
alive with a multitude of wan millipedes.
Scarred.
But how, they wanted to know
and why and did it hurt bad
and when and where and why again.
So they learned of the grind of shattered
glass on bone, of many extra mouths
gushing blood, of friendship and its price
- one hundred stitches more or less.
And what is more
they came to know
a man who wandered where he wished
who worked enough to make a meal
and slept in many different beds
with many different girls
in rooms, in tents, copses and mountain ferns.
They met the man with the endless chat-up lines
who swirled the girls with the whirling Waltzers
and tended bar better than Tom Cruise;
who hoisted heavy barrels of beer into bond
and sweated heat-ridden buckets on the blast;
who entertained the children on the Camp
and gave old ladies a welcome touch of youth.
They learned of fights and friendships
of protests, profanity and passion
of scribbled pictures and scrawled poems
thrown away or sold for pints of ale.
They saw their father then
was a different man to now:
secure, settled and warm
like an old fire with flames within.
Morning over, then,
Questions answered
my satisfied son smiled his thanks
traced the tributaries on my face,
hugged me, rose and turned
and gazed with fascination at the squirrels
sequestered in the trees.
Mourning over, now.
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YEAR 3 : PROMISES
Be spare with promises,
circumspect: these prim and pretty
parcels of pledge
are wont to squat egregiously
and chase your eyes,
or else slyly hide and swell
with newly-harboured hopes
Take care, be spare, avoid delay;
be ready for delivery day.
Son-spotted, this pannier of promises
gathered and gleaned
while panning for nuggets among
the spoil heaps of old songs:
“I will show you morning
On a thousand hills
And kiss you
And bring you seven golden daffodils.”
The pledge is made
I will shoulder this promise pack.
I will deliver.
A problem, son posed,
in this sad and cynical age:
“Is it OK for boys to kiss their Dads at ten?”
It’s OK, more than OK, at ten,
It’s just the same, and more, at twenty
It’s still fine at thirt …
at thir …
at th …
There will never be time enough for kisses
Between the string of sunrise hills
and the sorry bunch of daffodils.
The frosted earth heaves
And the treetops chime in the cold ringing dawn
A wisp of weariness drifts by
Apprehension curls in a corner of my mind
the haze-shrouded morning segues
to promised peaks of cloud-sundered hills;
Memories of majestic magisterial mountains
conspiring in silent communion
with mist-soaked dawn dappled dales
In this landscape of misplaced modulations
Across the shapeless steppes of my mind
I sense within the psychic wilderness,
pollen-borne and putrid,
another self chasing the whispers and scents
of long-extinguished lanterns.
Last-first seems here appropriate
in the final distillation
of yellow-headed hopes
a promise of daffodils delivered
a pledge redeemed and yet
I am burdened:
bound by promises
I will never get to make.
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YEAR 4: VACANT PLACES
Bleed in the sink:
Mother’s midge-whine words
Reverberate and ricochet
among the vacant places
of my stone-still skull: shocked
and disbelieving eyes fixated
on a sliver of flesh atop the little mound of mash
stained Rorschach-red.
Mother grips my sliced thumb tight,
Plunges my pain to numbness
just below the tap’s freezing flow
and slots the fresh rinsed sliver into place.
Over her shoulder
She directs my sisters to eat, eat,
As the wind and bind of bandage
Hides this unseasonable horror
From sensitive sight.
A fresh plate for me
In my pristine vacant place
Half mother’s mash
And sprouts from sisters gleefully given;
No meat, thank you,
I have had a surfeit of flesh.
Sisters, once again all smiles and squirms,
Enjoy their meal. I ingest the food
And digest along with mother’s words:
In future I will tend my pains in private;
I will hasten, and when hidden,
I will bleed in the sink.
This lesson learned long ago:
To face a vacant place
At a crowded table
Among the festive family gathered
For the merry meal.
I will shake myself
Free from fear of a phantom at the feast.
I will make myself
Defrost my rue-rimed face with a semblance of a smile
Or, failing these,
I will take myself
Aside and hurriedly hide
Behind a mardi-gras mask
my Gorgon’s grimace and, in silent solitude
to save the tinsel from the toxin,
I will bleed in the sink.
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WEBMAKER & FRIENDS NOTES
This was the first poem in memory of Rhys, written shortly after his death.
ABOUT FACE NOTES
It was the anniversary of my son’s suicide. I had mourned for a year, and felt it was time for the mourning to end … and remembrance to begin. I chose to visit a favourite family spot and to remember the day when my children, led by my son sought to ‘fill in’ the gaps in my life story. As a starting point they presented a photograph of me as the last piece in the jig-saw. Before my son died this was the lasting memory we shared.
PROMISES NOTES
If this poem makes any reader feel something for my son, I am glad for that – the saddest thing about his funeral was that the only mourners were colleagues, family and friends of my ex-wife and me. No friends of Rhys could be found. The poem came after a chance remark – careless or callous, I’m not sure which – made by my ex-wife. “He was never happy since he was fifteen” Which was, of course, the age of my son when the marriage broke up and I left the family home. All the feelings of guilt, never deeply buried, re-surfaced and, well, this poem was the result. The incident referred to actually happened.
VACANT PLACES NOTES
There will be few festive tables without an un-laid vacant place ... where someone dearly loved, and equally dearly missed, should sit ... and yet it seems unfair of the mourner to cast a cloud over the other revellers. They are entitled to their joy and merriment, and those who grieve must cope as best they can. I took my lesson from my mother ... sorrows [she believed] should be taken in solitude, and indeed much of her life in a loveless second marriage was testament to this belief. It's certainly not everybody's way - it may not even be the best way, but now it's mine. The incident referred to - where I sliced the end off my thumb at the Christmas Dinner - actually occurred.
Comments (17)
dhanco
Most interesting, provocative and revealing read, Mike. Your way with words amazes me and I am truly speechless. Having lost my oldest son nearly 8 years ago, I can easily relate to your words and grief. Most excellent writing.
Minuano
I've read a couple before Mike, but, nevertheless the subtle touches and the sudden turnarounds stll exhilirates this reader. “I will show you morning On a thousand hills And kiss you And bring you seven golden daffodils.” The pledge is made I will shoulder this promise pack. I will deliver. For every end ... there's a new beginning. I'm sure Rhys is proud and pleased with his Poppa's sublime works; in letters and imagery. regards from Florida, -Julian
helanker
Dear Mike. I dont think I have any wise words to give you, that could take your sorrow away. I wish I had. I do feel and understand your sorrow and I feel with you. Hugs Helle
RodolfoCiminelli
Excellent and creative integral realization my friend....!!! Beautiful B&W image.....!!!!
auntietk
A beautiful tribute, my friend. You leave me without words.
Meisiekind
Mike, I will rather comment on site mail. xx
romanceworks
I regret that I understand your words far better than I want to, after losing my beloved soul mate less than two years ago. The loss of those we so deeply love is always felt alone. Bless the time you and Rhys had together and the memories that live through you. He was and is special, and so are you. CC
timtripp
i'm dumbfounded.
hipps13
Hi Mike No words but tears so much loss yet so much gained I miss me grandpa like you do your son If only I think Maybe he would be alive but then again maybe not beautiful work warm hug, Linda
beachzz
May you both be at peace, what a powerful, touching tribute to your son.
AusPoet
Mike, I am glad you reposted these. I think it was four years ago when I first read them, and they still reach into my heart and pinch at mysterious nerves, those ones which make gut-wracking tears spring forth. Your loss is a sacred thing You do not walk alone. I am grateful to have the honour of sharing this space of yours.
algra
What an immense sad story. I only can express my compassion in the Dutch language, I'm afraid you can't understand it. Strength Michael.
avalonfaayre
You know I visited again. And I will again. And hold your hand and hug you from across the sea.
amirapsp
Wonderful work!!!
D.C.Monteny
Oh man.....
vlaaitje
A beautiful tribute, wonderful words so as always
leanndra
Such words are these that have my eyes awash with tears so that I can barely see to type this. The heart, mind and spirit remember such things. Baring ones soul takes a wonderful kind of courage. You have this kind of courage!