abandoned tomb by countess8

Photography • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Apr 01, 2008

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Abandoned Tomb I sit forgotten and alone, overlooking where we once stood In the spot where you left me where our love was in bloom Its a view I think I'll see much longer than I should I stand here as if I were an abandoned tomb I echo inside with the words we used to share I am held together still by the bonds we made But I am being overgrown by the weeds of despair And there are cracks forming in the foundation we laid I stand a victim to the elements of time Unable to move or to defend myself from what will come Only left with the feelings I use to write this rhyme And when I'm finished here there will be none Soft winds sometimes whistle through me still And I swear I can hear your voice calling to me But I know that its just a dreams shuddering from the kill Of those last few thoughts of what we thought we could be Left to stand watch and yet fall apart as the years pass away I stand forever in the spot where you took your love from me Left here with only yesterdays and this is where I'll stay I am the abandoned tomb of what we had and what could be by Carpaythya

Comments (20)

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jeroni

8:05AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

maravillosa foto con ese toque dramatico excelente

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timtripp

8:49AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

marvelous image!

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SapUS59

8:54AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Superb b/w image, excellent work.

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Meisiekind

9:48AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Wonderful poem with so much pain hidden between the lines and a stunning and very fitting image. I hope you are ok my friend. xx

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DaiKepler

10:27AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

The crack in the cement points right to the darkness. We all need a little dark imagery to remind us of what is most important! Masterfully done!

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durleybeachbum

12:26PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Excellent match of words and image!

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Jaykayyorks

2:19PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

You been creeping round grave yards again? lol Interesting image, nice one caz :o)

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redchilicat

2:58PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Fantastic composition! Looks great in B&W

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Mad-Mike

3:59PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

A death Inside Sketchy thoughts, And broken dreams. Wrenching out my heart, Even though it bleeds. Making me cry, When you should make me smile. I've been walking alone, For a long long while. When your hands are at my throat, Mine are at my side. I just hold my breath, And die inside. You broke my dreams, Of love and lust. You beat my mind, Back into the dust. How could I trust you? How could I smile? But your eyes light up, For just a while. Bend me, Break me. Bury me deep, So never again, Will I have to weep. Very nice photo Caroline honey!!! have a great night ~ Kisses and hugs ;-) xxxxxxx

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JaneEden

4:29PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Mike I can't read your words in red (pity) Caroline this is a moving scene and also very moving words my dear friend. I love the POV of this excellent photography!!! hugs Jane xx

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MrsRatbag

8:16PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

Gorgeous image, I love this!

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Richardphotos

8:52PM | Tue, 01 April 2008

maybe forgotten by the relatives but whoever may reside there is now on the worldwide web.no name to associate with the person or persons but they are in the thoughts of all your viewers

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