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SHADES OF GREEN

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Apr 08, 2008
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Convalescence: some years ago I found my 'formula for recovery' whenever I've been beset by health or other issues. First allow yourself a limited time for guilt-free wallowing¦ be as self-pitying as you need, as repentant as you need - just feel free to hurt. Then take yourself out of your head and give yourself over to sensory input and allow only pleasant and positive thoughts and memories in bit by little bit. All I had when I wrote this piece was my garden with a superb bank of trees at the junction with the opposite house. It was enough. SHADES OF GREEN Far past my spring green age I sit, all autumn touched with frost, in introspective summer sun and contemplate the lines and limits of this limp and languorous life. Above and beyond, the marbled sky, creamy clouds skilfully stitched by sedulous swifts into the clear cerulean blue, to patch and paste a quilted backdrop for my bordering bank of trees. Such trees! Such leaves! Such showers, shoots and sprays and clamouring cascades in myriad shades of green: Here at the very twig tip the freshest of spring green brings to my musings small fingers shyly seeking in the spring meadows for the timorous hand-holds of new sweethearts and soft lips barely brushed - first steps in a dewy-eyed dance of love. Further back, a deeper green, so like the fiddle-head ferns on mountain fells and bracken fronds bent and broken flat for comfort in passion's pas de deux or deeper still to bring to mind the glass of quarry pools and strings of weed a-cling to strands of slick and sodden hair. Emerald leaves spark a memory of firefly nights tucked tight together with Terpsichore: a passionate prelude to a closer dance. Higher, in the conifers, blue-green needles dusted with a hazy hint of smoke take me to the sea and secret sandy dunes and languid cherished shoreline loves So many greens, from mint to sage, and clever besides to pick each time the perfect foil for blood berries and pastel blooms and even in the passing time, the fall, the beauty shifts from gold to flame - though sad to say these painted shrouds will duly die discarded on the ground And so I sit replete, content with visions I could not invent: to soothe my soul and please my eye these shades of green will ever satisfy.

Comments (22)


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amirapsp

4:18AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

So beautiful. Love the words going with the image...Hugs

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RodolfoCiminelli

5:46AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Excellent and creative realization my friend.....!!!!! Great postwork too...!!!!

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STEVIEUKWONDER

6:40AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Beautiful words Mike. Remember though matey, I just had a kick in the ribs also and it damned well hurt! lol But..........there but for the grace of God go I! I'm alive godammit! Isn't life beautiful! Steve ;o)

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Meisiekind

7:03AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

What a wonderful play with words. Excellent once again Mike!!! Emerald leaves spark a memory of firefly nights tucked tight together with Terpsichore: a passionate prelude to a closer dance. Wow... this is really great. Hugs, Carin xx

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dhanco

8:11AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Your words bring such vivid images into my head and reading them is like actually seeing beautiful art. Thank you for sharing and inspiring!

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helanker

8:21AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

So really lovely and the poem too.

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kansas

8:59AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Wonderful words and picture.

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romanceworks

10:06AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

I always marvel at all the shades of green,in nature, and in life. Very beautiful writing. CC

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zoren

10:25AM | Tue, 08 April 2008

awesome....!

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vaggabondd

12:02PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Oh very nice work my friend :)

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ascript

1:16PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Beautiful words and image :)

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algra

2:14PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Nice work.

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leanndra

3:44PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Beautiful evocative poetry! Thanks for sharing your talent!

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hipps13

4:05PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Hi Mike Words a joy to read thinking of shades of green I get distracted and daydream beautiful work shines warm hug with a smile, Linda

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Blush

5:45PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Beautiful sweetie sighs Hugs Susan~

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auntietk

8:53AM | Wed, 09 April 2008

Oh! Beautiful! I can see each color, each association. You pulled me through the poem with such a firm hand, perfectly paced, every word a joy. I was involved in every line. Excellent writing!

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se_400_Lux

2:52PM | Wed, 09 April 2008

curtains stage set with candles/lights in the wooden planks no electrics pure projection as the lines extend out linebyline take wing colloquiality beyond out to the cosmos ~ *Always time for your lines

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avalonfaayre

4:00PM | Wed, 09 April 2008

Bad day today. Thanks for justifying my need to cry. A nostalgic waltz through the verdure isn't always full of fond memories. Lovely image, words that wrap round the heart.

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D.C.Monteny

6:18PM | Wed, 09 April 2008

Your formula is an almost exact copy of mine, we must have been reading from the same lines of life. A most wonderful piece of poetry!

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beachzz

7:18AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Oh my, you do it every time!! So very well said~~~

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AusPoet

3:33PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Awesome and inspiring imagery, Mike!
My favourite word choice for today:
"...timorous hand-holds of new sweethearts
and soft lips barely brushed..."

Nedarkhess

5:11AM | Sun, 13 April 2008

Amazing, I really like how you used the words to create an image in the reader's mind. I can see lots of green right now in front of my inner eye although it's all grey and brown outside the window. Good job!


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