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YOUNG AGAIN

Writers Romance posted on Apr 10, 2008
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YOUNG AGAIN Such sweet whispers carry words born in distant climes to tempt my sleeping senses and make me young again. From far away your words bring long-lost tingles to my tongue of sweet and limpid lips, above below, honey-dewed in the tang of surging seas to quench my new-awaked thirst and make me young again. Again your whispered words bring back again the soft and tender strokes of rounded hills and secret dales; most missed - the moist and mossy dell wherein I wander, now here, now out of sight and make me young again. And all-in-all these teasing tender words raise up in me those parts too long laid low and fire my passions, stir my languid loins to wish for near forgotten twinings and make me young again. Whence comes your magic of rejuvenation? an elixir of youth for me to slowly sip; a liquid flow of sweetest love in which to dream and bathe? I will ever listen to these whispered words which make me young again.

Comments (19)


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RodolfoCiminelli

5:59AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Wonderful and creative realization my friend.......!!!!!

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helanker

6:03AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

A really beautiful Poem indeed, Mike. It is very sweet and I like it very much and the image too.

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Meisiekind

6:28AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Oh Mike - you speak so deep into my heart and soul with this lovely poem. It is truly a work of art and I can somehow perfectly relate to it. Excellent my dear friend. Hugs, Carin xx

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beachzz

6:47AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

You've touched me deeply here, it's something I've just lived ~~ beautifully written and illustrated, thank you!!

Realm_Of_Illusion

6:49AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Very beautifully written.

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busi2ness

8:31AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Young again and the keyword "rejuvenate". What have we done to deserve it. Well said Mike.

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avalonfaayre

9:13AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Bless my languid loins, that was beautiful!

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romanceworks

10:39AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

A beautiful poem,Mike, in so many ways. CC

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kansas

10:53AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Ahhhh, the memories do keep us young. Wonderful poem.

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dhanco

11:20AM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Wonderful words, so touching and emotional. Thanks for renewing near forgotten memories, Mike.

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leanndra

2:19PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Mike, Such a beautiful, evocative and sensual piece of prose! You are so talented!

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AusPoet

3:29PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Mike, wonderful work. Its passion, joy and unbridled enthusiasm add beautifully to the story you tell.

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hipps13

4:08PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Hi Mike such beautiful words bring about a smile and a thought "to be young again" sweet sunshine to you warm hug with a smile, Linda

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algra

3:40AM | Fri, 11 April 2008

Beautiful depiction and nice words. As an old man I recognize this feeling but I certainly do enjoy it.

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amirapsp

12:22PM | Fri, 11 April 2008

Fantastic work.

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D.C.Monteny

6:10PM | Fri, 11 April 2008

A most beautiful poem, Mike, so sensual and emotional...

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auntietk

10:32PM | Fri, 11 April 2008

Beautifully written, intense and sensual.

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bangonthedrums

4:16AM | Thu, 17 April 2008

outstanding poem, mike... aside from its rich imagery and the wonderfully visceral reaction its raw sensuality provokes, its language has an ebb and flow about it that parallels the passionate act it describes... a masterful delight!

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novelist

7:29AM | Wed, 30 April 2008

Such depictive language, powerful, sensual, rythmic, and graceful. "honey-dewed in the tang of surging seas" so lovely!


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