Vickie #1 by cat_amaris

Photography • Portraits • posted on Apr 12, 2008

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I have been away for a long time - but now I'm back! I have deleted my previous gallery, and am hoping for a fresh start. I hope you will like what I submit, but if not, I hope you will help me improve by letting me know where my downfalls are...

This is from a recent shoot I did for a friend from University; I know the shot is pretty soft, but I kind of like the effect... any hints on improvement?

Thanks for your perusal! Much love,

Cat

Comments (7)

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Fred255

6:06PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Welcome back! First I would like to say pretty girl. The short is slightly out of focus. Also by using the flash on your camera the high lights are blown. I you are going to do shots like this you need separate lights with defusesers to soften the light.

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DCLEW2

6:22PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

This is a great shot. It could use a little more contrast. very nice.

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Geophree

6:29PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

I enjoyed this image. I would increase the contrast only. I look forward to more of your work.

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wadej

9:17PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Welcome back! I agree with Fred255, I would use a softbox or reflected light to soften the light and that will allow you go with a sharper focus. This is good and I look forward to seeing more.

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Longrider

10:07PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

It seems to be a little too light imo,otherwise it looks nice to me. For what it's worth,i never use a flash,just the natural light and sometimes photoshop to adjust things. The model is a nice woman and the composition is good,i also like it's softnes. Cool thing.

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