Life And Death Of Nobody by Brian S.
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Life through my eyes went from color to grey
My missed ship seems to have set sail
These feelings I have get worse every day
It's made me quite shaken and frail
Feeling alone I stay in my home
I guess you could call it my tomb
Not much left to say with each passing day
I'm sure I'll be meeting with doom
So if I died and no one knew my name
Did I ever really exist
Bright light fills my eyes promising to take away all the pain
As my life fades away with the morning mist
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Comments (6)
AusPoet
Brian, this speaks to me, cries out in its dismay. It's beautiful, poignant and very moving with its big questions.
Please know that you are not alone with these thoughts and feelings.
Also, please understand that it's temporary to feel this way, and there will be the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel - in LIFE. Raise your head, look up and you'll see it there.
My light was curiosity. What will yours be?
alltheoriginalnames
Whoa, thats heavy man. Really deep stuff.
DennisReed
Powerful look from the abyss! But the good news is you do see the light! Keep reaching for it, for it does want to shine on you!
dhanco
Disturbing words and image, Brian. Look for that light. It's there. Take care.
Jay-el-Jay
Just watch out that the light at the end of tunnel isn't an oncoming train.
beachzz
Sad, dark words, but please know there are people who care and who would bring you out of this if they could. There is light, reach for it~~~~