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The Bird Lottery

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Apr 23, 2008
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"Tempting, so tempting!" All that bounty, spread out, just waiting to be scooped up, picked over, the best morsels taken, spirited away. "At a risk, there was always a risk". Small shufflings accompany that thought, little movements, not of impatience because impatient got you dead, just little rearrangements of body, comfort making movements, to ease the ache of waiting. And watching, always... the watching. Feathers scud across the planking soundlessly. Wind whispers keeping company with the plink sounds of red drops as they hit the ground below. One learned to keep a good ear attuned, but couldn't always count on sound. That same wind blew through trees, whistling and fluttering leaves on the branches or in this time of year, across the ground. The bounty was at the generosity of the red-haired one, she daily put out offerings, clumping, clumsily large footed across the span of wood space, filling assorted containers with thistle seed, cracked corn, sunflower seeds, millet. There was a small wire holder for seed pressed into fat, a high prize when one could get it. It kept the cold at bay a bit more than just the seed. And generous she was, once the containers were full, and nuts put out for the bushy tailed ones, she scattered more seed across the wood rail, it made it easy to get at, except then, one was so exposed. An airborne feather floated past, testifying to the exposure problem. That one hadn't been careful enough, nor fast enough. Plump breasted as she was, she became a tasty catch for the whiskered, amber-eyed grey one, who at this moment was preening paws where blood had splattered upon them. If he followed his usual habits, he would mouth his catch and amble away with it to a more secure spot under the bush far over there. Then it would be safe, for a while. It would be the best time to venture out past the close branches of this fragrant green pine. Out onto that flat wood, by the red-haired one's large nest, because then whiskers would be busy with his catch. Waiting, waiting, "Now!" Taking off, landing on the rail, quickly perusing the scattering of seeds on the wood, snagging one up, the sense of elation suddenly turns to stark, freezing fear, as the shadow of large predator wings silently glide along the planks. "Tempting, so tempting!" thinks the red-tailed feathered one, as his sharp talons grasp the tiny, feathered body. YZ 02-25-06

Comments (15)


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jocko500

7:32PM | Wed, 23 April 2008

wonderful words and image

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auntietk

7:45PM | Wed, 23 April 2008

Wow. Excellent work! You have such an ability to put yourself in another place. I'm totally impressed!

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MrsRatbag

8:16PM | Wed, 23 April 2008

Beautiful image and captivating story -- well done!

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drifterlee

10:47PM | Wed, 23 April 2008

Cute bird and story!

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beachzz

12:37AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

Wow, very well told!!!

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JeffG7BRJ

3:52AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

Excellent writing, I wonder if it's from experiencing the actual act? It certainly has a ring of truth to it, I can see it happening. I have seen it happen, is more the mark. It was a pigeon though taken down by a sparrow hawk, near to a feeding area. Superb capture of the little one, and the story is fantastic. Bravo!!!!!

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ledwolorz

4:17AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

Beautiful bird and story.

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SapUS59

4:34AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

excellent image and writing, great work my friend !!

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G_Mansco

4:44AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

Great writing and capture ;O)

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awjay

7:33AM | Thu, 24 April 2008

thank you for sharing

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Art_Ramos

4:31PM | Fri, 25 April 2008

Great close up shot!

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suignard

5:44AM | Mon, 28 April 2008

great shot !5

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MaraP

2:25PM | Wed, 30 April 2008

Splendid! A pleasure fot the eye!! 5+++

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RobyHermida

11:39PM | Sat, 03 May 2008

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!♥

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meico

5:00AM | Mon, 05 May 2008

A wry look at the 'food chain' - uncomfortably [as it should be] close to black humour, but none the worse for that. You've thankfully resisted the temptation to make this litle allegory a little-birdy-ah-how-sweet tale, and give us nature as it is - raw in tooth and claw. A little literary gem. Mike


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