"RatRace" by phillycheese81
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I have not finished with this image even though i entered it in a contest like this as finished.. please crit. it for me and be harsh.. it helps. thanks- hope u like what i have done so far.. lot to still do.
-pcheese
Comments (8)
kaef
well...I was prepared to be harsh but it looks pretty fuckin' good to me. Nice textural work, nice specular sheen to the tile. The only things that bug me are the bases of the columns, they could be a little more substantial, and the candles in the background. They don't really add anything and look like flaws in the image, to me. But that's being ultra nitpicky. Nice job!
phillycheese81
thanks for helping out people... keep it comeing.. i changed the texture on each colume in this picture but i guess i didnt change them enough.. thanks for the fyi on everything people.
btlchooz
There is a cement link problem with the stones in front of me. I agree with kaef, the candle are nice but useless. Try to adapt the texture to each column. Keep improve and don't give up :)
styx
Harsh is not what this calls for. It's a fabulous picture, and a really cool concept. If you want some criticism - the sky out of the window, doesn't look that natural, and just a thought, I thought it would be cool if the maze was like a scaled-down city - rat race - but just a thought. Awesome stuff.
pbrain
Ok, I like it, crit. = sky in window distorted. Candles can go kaef is right. If you enlarge the collum base you'll mess up the texture, if You think they should be changed add another primitive. textures for columes need to be changed per colume, in nature never exactly the same. Add a crack here or there, change the brightness setting, that kind of thing. lastly the lighting could be toned down and increase or add a glo to the cheese. and my final comment is, if I didn't like it I would not have bothered to hopefully help.
khoogeveen
I love the maze, how did you create it?
Caligula
The tiles could use more definition between the grout and the tiles themselves. Right now they blur together too much.
murphthesurf
PC81- COOL ! Don't change nothin' ! Who says skys have to look like Earth all the time? To me it looks like a place where the gods gather sometimes to look down on "The Ratrace" that they have wrought...like everyone on this planet is being watched...like that movie, "The Truman Show". I have often wondered if that has something to do with evolution, and if the Dinosaurs where killed because the "Gods" (Aliens?, Atlanteans?) got bored of watching them... Peace. Murph~