Was It You by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on May 01, 2008

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Sitting over looking the river With my friend the pen I hear someone whisper my name I look around But I am all alone Was it you I pick up my pen To write again When I feel a hand Touch my hand Was it you I try and concentrate Really hard When I feel a tickle On the back of my neck That drives me insane Was it you Useless to try and write I close my eyes For just a while When I feel a gentle kiss Move across my lips Was it you

Comments (14)

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beachzz

1:14AM | Thu, 01 May 2008

Sweet, soft, dreamy words and foto, I love this, every single word!!!

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robintemplar

1:23AM | Thu, 01 May 2008

Hmmmm...very nice! You certainly have a way with words, Randy. You evoke many emotions and thoughts with that little friend of yours. lol Thank you for sharing! Hugz, Robin

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meico

5:43AM | Thu, 01 May 2008

A nice gentle and whimsical piece of romantic poetry. Keep the flag of romance flying, my friend! Mike

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Bossie_Boots

6:04AM | Thu, 01 May 2008

Superb writing as always hugs lou x

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auntietk

7:08AM | Thu, 01 May 2008

This is just lovely! You paint such a clear picture with your words, and the image you chose to go with this poem is perfect. The whole thing has such a nice feel to it. Beautiful!

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