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This Old Fool

Writers Realism posted on May 04, 2008
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This old fool Sits alone in front of the piano again Because enough was never enough For this old Vaggabondd He always knew There was one more song One more dance One more lady to kiss To make love to But the years Have slipped up on him like a thief Now he is alone And lonely And everyone is tired Of his song But he's still the old fool Who just keeps playing He just can't help himself He is the Vaggabondd This is a old picture I took a few years back, back in the good old days when I could have a beard :) I tried to pose like I was eating beans and bread like a minor or something haha. How did I do? I wanted to write something new but my brain was on empty so I went with a old poem to go with this old picture I hope everyone likes it Randy

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OldHippieKeyboard

12:59PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

That pic works perfectly with this one, Randy. After all, what could be more lonely than a man eating beans out of a metal plate in the middle of the woods? LOL... Nice selective coloring -- it adds to tha solitary feel...

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meico

1:02PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

We all play out life's drama my friend ... but time is a thief of the finest parts. Nice poem! Mike

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Bossie_Boots

1:37PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

your picture is perfect as are your words superb as always hugs lou x

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Lashia

1:37PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

A great poem to go with a great picture. I like your use of selective colouring here in the image, and the poem is very beautiul. Thanks for sharing.

lil_t

3:01PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

Very touching poem Randy, lots of feeling in such few words...the shot is great as well with the color effect. How's the beans? (hehe) not a real fav for us women... just kidding! Are you telling us you are a beardless man now? :) Thanks for sharing with us!

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tennesseecowgirl

4:34PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

love it Randy, and the photo!!

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beachzz

5:08PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

Nothin wrong with old poems and old pix, they're always still fun to read and see; this one's no exception!!

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ledwolorz

5:09PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

Beautiful poem and photo.

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brycek

9:28PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

Wonderful photo and words..very nice Randy!!

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RobyHermida

10:36PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

LOL!!!

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LovelyPoetess

10:46PM | Sun, 04 May 2008

Nice merge of words and photo, I particularly like the line "but the years have slipped up on him like a thief" they have a way of doing that to us all. : )

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robintemplar

12:16AM | Mon, 05 May 2008

Only those who leave this world young, escape the trials of those left behind. There's an old saying Randy, "you begin the journey toward death, the moment you're born". Gads...that sounds so depressing...but true. I prefer the many words of my (now deceased) Irish grandmother..."Maireann croí éadrom i bhfad." Translation: "A light heart lives long." Wonderful image and poem, Randy. You're very talented...and I have a wish of my own for you...(another Irish blessing). "May brooks and trees and singing hills join in the chorus too, and every gentle wind that blows send happiness to you." Hugz, Robin

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auntietk

1:01AM | Mon, 05 May 2008

Well written, moody piece my friend, no matter how old it is. I like the photo, too. Nice hat! :)

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dhanco

8:50AM | Mon, 05 May 2008

Beautiful work, Randy and old is always good. All of your words are so real and true to life. Excellent work!

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The_D_List

11:29PM | Thu, 08 May 2008

very cool man i like it. even on empty ur brains still goin. although i'll bet someone might be upset because someone probably just gave the beans n bread to you for free...L.O.L.!!!


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