the hungry child by ashleigh2k8
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The hungry child
Once there was a child called Ruby. she always said she was hungry but her parents knew she was lying and one day her parents said to ruby you eat way to much junk food, but ruby simply said i dont have to if i dont want to . we tried said mother but father kept saying we need to stop her eating junk food and also easter is coming up said mother. yes it is isnt it said father we need to start buying her 2 easter eggs a year you buy her 1 and i`ll buy her 1. dad said now dont mention any of this to ruby, that will be hard why said dad then mum pointed to the door. ruby had been listening to the whole conversation then dad yelled ruby. the end
Comments (12)
beachzz
Wow, Ashleigh, you have a whole new talent here
I love this little story, and I love Ruby as well, she sounds like a very smart girl!!lots like you, in fact!!!mickuk50
excellent story baby .sounds abit like you :o)..kidding grandad xx
SapUS59
great story Ashleigh :-)
Bossie_Boots
What a fabulous short story really very well put together and captured me which is hard as i dont like reading superb work hugs lou x
Cytisus
Super story, do you really eat a lot of junk food???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mad-Mike
Hehehe real cute story :-) you are very good at writing! keep it up!!!
durleybeachbum
That's my sort of story, short but plenty happening! well done.
timtripp
well crafted ashleigh!
auntietk
A wonderful vignette, and I can clearly see all your characters in my mind! I like it that Ruby's parents think she shouldn't eat junk, but are going to buy her 2 easter eggs. I wonder how she learned to eat junk! Hmmm. Maybe from her easter-egg-buying parents? :)
rainbows
A wonderful story Ashleigh, you write so well. Diane.
swjkie100
^_^ Very cool and creative!
Charberry
I definitely ate too much easter candy this year. :o)